Replied 2:S-Man aka yung-S street dreams
NinoScar Deep shyt


While im Hustling tryna expand my pockets as well as my mind//
I know they'res a million niggas on the grind but yo im one of a kind//
i dont fuc wit bullshyt niggas for dem i got da 9//
nowadayz a bytch aint tryna holla if u aint got atleast 1 piece of shyne//
i aint got money to burn im still tryna get mines//
nicks,dubs,quarters or dimes hustlin aint a crime//
white folks been hustling niggas since a beginning of time//
dey even caught da indians wildwit dat wine//
I learned early that the only person u can depend on is urself//
and dat niggas act funny when it comes to sharing wealth sayin the only thing u really need in this world is ur health//
trade lives wit me an see how being broke felt//
mama always ask me y my outlook on life is so bad//
and i always say cuz shyt we neva had//
she say u breathing u should be glad and dat u aint end up in jail like ur dad//
I wanna succeed just as much as the next lad and writing rhymes wit my pen and pad is leading me nowhere fast//
im living for cash, hard times, and sum ass//
things was easier in the past i wish now the only thing i have to worry about is takin out the trash or going to class//
i know i gotta make my life last but eryday i see my life flash in front of my eyes//
and all can do is cry i dont wanna live no mo but im afraid to die//
so i get high go back on da streets tryna get my piece of the pie//
but i know one day i gotta die so all i can do is sigh//
i try to make my life right but i gotta survive and 9to5's was neva my thang so i gotta slang rocks at night//

Uppin^ holla at a nigga mayne

simple vocab, had a nice key. all in all pety good piece

aight thanx dog

aight for the subject matter the slow structure was tight people here want to much of a battle structure you doing great.hit me for a collab

Uppin

on the real, this wasnt half bad, its simple yet entertaining, would make an ok audio

and im bein serious, all u gotta work on now is metaphors
and practice doin audio so u can find your flow and voice and shit

ight dog
remember the name

yo bones thanx fo da reply sayin da shyt be my only problem always get out of breath and shyt

YOU STILL IN RICHMOND

im still in richmond moved to da suburbs doe