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Old 02-27-05, 09:08 AM   #1
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From: I'll stay swinging until I die, cuz Nigga's said I'll die by Hanging- Wreckage
Post Not who I was

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You could have punched my mom in her gut and still couldnt "da-fetus"//
Hearing shyt reign, Listen to us bleedin in'a
Never stopped to help Cause physically, Wasnt in need of it...//

Bar to bar killing, Like alcohol was a fuel to the fire//
Don't know nothin but hurt...cuz'I
Rip skin with this sidearm, shreddin your dream's Like barbed wires//

Wreckage is back again Back in the game, Not bein ashamed to the game//
Fancy lights Candle lit, Notta hoe could handle it, Cuz'Uh

(FAST SPIT)

Flippin'The bird, Shot the whole heard, Not a soul was scared....
2 click's, wad'nt finished, U tried when u was dared,....

Droppin' On top Like records spinnin -n- Finna destroy
Cuz hoe all you ever was, was daddy's bitch toy....

Im rusty Laters
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Old 02-27-05, 09:46 AM   #2
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it was good ur flow & off in certain areas but basically was nice the vocab, wordplay were str8 could b tighten up a lil more but othawise ur structure was on point overall 8.5/10
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Old 02-27-05, 03:59 PM   #3
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Uppin.......plz
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