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02-27-05, 06:13 PM | #1 | ||
Ms. Get Gully
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My Confessions To God (Sample)
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=177354
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1989024 ight drop honest feedback n leave links to your songs i'll give feedback www.rideinconline.com/jamroom/bands/165 (at the top now.) The song- I needed to know what it sounded like recorded or whatever so i recorded some of it...and the ending of it sounds real weird i dont know what happened but oh well just the sloppy Copy and wanted advice on whether its a good topic or song . Last edited by I_Daughter_Hoz : 03-07-05 at 02:14 AM. |
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02-27-05, 07:59 PM | #2 | ||
Ms. Get Gully
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02-27-05, 09:39 PM | #3 | ||
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aight vocals are to loud...quality needs work...holla at me and i'll help you with that...flow was aight...kinda feel off at a few point...lyrics were felt...real shit yamean......delivery was ok...breathe control problems here and there....rhyme scheme was good...just need some polishing...i
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03-01-05, 06:03 PM | #4 | |
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it waz an aight track you had a nice flow nice lyrics like da man said above me you vocals were to loud dats da only thing bad about it dont kno why its gettin slept on
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03-01-05, 07:11 PM | #5 | |
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voice to loud.............i was feelin the rhyme scheme, except maybe some problems, like when you come back in, it is at a different level. I don't have a lot to say that hasn't been said. I don't think it should get slept on, but its got potential. I will post more later when i hear more of your shit, peace
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03-02-05, 09:41 AM | #6 | ||
Ms. Get Gully
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werd thnx for replies...and yea i agree vocals pretty damn loud and the other problem is the last end of it where it sound like i recorded with something else.i dunno what happened there but i'll be doing this song over soon
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03-06-05, 10:22 PM | #7 | ||
You Cant Handle The Truth
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you already know ya voice is madd loud on this so ain't no point in me rippin' on dat...ya flow's kewl here, but could've been smoother though, on a lot of spots you dragged the word to fit the bar instead of adding words in...lyrics is nyce though, you came nyce on this lyrically...just wish you'd drop more, lol...
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03-06-05, 10:49 PM | #8 | ||
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Vocals are WAY too high. You need a pop filter badly. The lyrics were solid and stuck to a point for the most part. Stepped off the topic once in a while. Flow was on and worked well enough to keep me listening. Half way through your first verse your audio qual changed and sounded liek you were speaking from inside a shoebox. You gotta work on your fadeouts. All your tracks I've heard end abruptly like the feds came in and shut your shit down when you were reocording. May as well do it right - only takes a sec.
Good track so far, but needs more - at least another verse, or a chorus at the least.
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03-06-05, 11:27 PM | #9 | |
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aight well you know most of the crits you need gurl, I gotta say the flow wasn't bad tho for sure, the best thing you can do is just keep ripping it and drop more tracks, alot less femcee's then emcee's so come up quick and mad peeps will want to collab with you
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03-07-05, 02:17 AM | #10 | ||
Ms. Get Gully
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word doom. i dont even know what happened...where it sounds different...i had went to bed before i finished it..woke up and tried to finish and shit was recording all weird..but for right now i dont know how to do all that turning down vocals n shit. so when i re-do it imma just end up sending it to someone to fix all up that goes for the rest as well..and yea i record in peices for most of my songs...lung power aint as good as it shuold be..plus i think its cuz i put so many words in a line.... thnx for feedback tho
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03-07-05, 08:46 AM | #11 | ||
You Cant Handle The Truth
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man, I can't record in pieces for shit...I gotta do shit one verse at a time...verse, then next wave do the hook, next wave do the 2nd verse and so on...don't ask me how to work on ya breathe control cuz I have no idea, but mine's good cuz I sing all the time, haha...far as your production, mine isn't the best, but I know a few tricks that I can tell you when I get home I'll PM or e-mail it to you...
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03-07-05, 02:20 PM | #12 | ||
Light Weight
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yo I like this track and the whole meaning of it only thing wrong is the mic quality and the volume of your vocals
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03-07-05, 03:19 PM | #13 | ||
The Ups and Downs of Life
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step away from the mic.. it sounds like its down your throat, rhyme scheme is extremely simple, lyrics are o.k, but i saw nothing special in this track, I expected something half decent from all the shit you talk, but nah, you really need to work on sounding comfortable on the mic... you need help mixing it, cuz it sounds like shit as far as clicks/pop/distortion go, and I think your writing is sub-par... keep droppin.
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