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"the Walking Dead"
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To be amid the living, yet not in the grave is painful,
Every waking hour or minute is filled with as little peace as to none, The constant disappointments, anger, and no answers are anywhere, I am the Walking Dead I have left off believing there will ever be any peace or happiness for me, That anyone can understand my pain or even care to help in my walk I walk among the living during the day to perform a job for payment, in order to survive according to this world's exchange_ to raise and take care of my son and me. I walk among the living to encounter what continual abuse, pain embarrassment, and lack of happiness this marriage has cost me. I among the living live in a room 9x12 or 10x12, out of boxes_with my son, hoping, praying, asking, and begging for assistance from the living, and no help has come. I among the living during the night_awake to sounds of loud music, dogs persistently barking, roaches traveling in my space, and the sickness of being alive. I continue to be among the living to eat without letup, and become this out of control being_ because I don't fit and its the only comfort I know, I among the living is the Walking Dead. I left my God, and I believe he no longer hears me, So I am alone and will soon cease to walk among the living and take my place among the dead_ perhaps then, I will rest. |
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this shit was soo fucking incredible to me i know EXACTLY where your coming from i was juist feeling the same way, i really really enjoyed this poem, instant respect, 1luv.
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This was good but make you bars closer together because that space was really putting me off. This was a nice concept and some good expression in there, this has potential so keep at it and you'll elevate to a good level.
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nice post... i was feeling it it was deep... i liked it a lot.... it was a good concept and had a new style that i was diggin~much respect~peace
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dat waz hot much luv
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thanx 4 da luv. imma have u posted too
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one of ur best pieces, good use of imagination, ur style clearly stands out keep it cumin
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thanx dunny keep upp!! fam
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