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Old 03-01-05, 07:31 PM   #1
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men cry

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Women say "men dont cry" actually we do
our heart maybe hard, but we got that emotional feeling too
some men dont want to show a tear infront of a girl face
caust its show's that they're pussies? I think its disgrace
I think its ok to show a tear, cause that means you care
To be a real man, is by showing your soft side, ya hear?
Never keep it inside, cause that's might cause some emotinal havoc
and if you want to know "real love" ^^ that might cause some static
i think thats the reason why "men" have lacking ability in knowing romantic
I think men dont want to feel the strong hurt felt of women emotional feelings like titanic
Thats why there's so many pimps and players, confusing love in women minds



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Old 03-01-05, 07:45 PM   #2
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Uppin This...........................................
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Old 03-01-05, 07:45 PM   #3
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I like this. I'm surrounded by people that act like this. lol. Nice key'd up drop. Keep em coming. Oh fix ya structure. I got bad eyesight.
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Old 03-01-05, 07:46 PM   #4
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Lmao! Wear Some Glasss Like 2-pac,lol

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Old 03-02-05, 09:25 AM   #5
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Love the concept of this one Because it's so true...women rather have a guy who can show his soft side once in a while.

Nice drop for a keystyle btw, vocab was good and so was your structure. Emotion was pure and topic was dope for sure! Nice going fam, keep it up!

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Old 03-02-05, 04:26 PM   #6
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Aiiight thanx Drama queen..........uppin for more feedbacks........
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Old 03-02-05, 05:21 PM   #7
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good job man, i like the topic here, and you had nice vocabulary and got your point across very well, nicely written too, keep it up.1
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Old 03-02-05, 08:12 PM   #8
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thanx.......for the feed-back.................................
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Old 03-02-05, 09:04 PM   #9
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This Was A Nice Piece Man, Pretty Good I Enjoyed The Emotion Man You Got Some Talent Keep It Up Coz
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