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Check in by: 03-04-05 at 09:15 PM

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Closed - Expired / old battle win

.Grafh. has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-01-05 09:48 PM.

On da real,ya wack so really ya cant fukk wit me
Onlyway ya beatin me,is if ya used my "verse"against"me"
Rv tired of ya,since ya recylce more lines den smarterchild
Ya da gaytype ta press pause on b-rabbits ass on 8mile
Ta be serious,ill give ya my lyrics so ya can really be "hotsh"it
Even then,drops i spit,gonna have ya walk around wit a safetykit
Ta play safe kid,im puttin out da "hotflame"my punches started
Want another win,i suggest ya keep votin fo'self like spul did
Da way i drop iLL lines on ya hommie,call "da medicine man"
You da kind of nigka ta swim in da ocean,when every1 tans
He aint "hot"keep it a "secret",and stay callin ya self "hotshh"
Mattafact,wheres mc firetruck?so he can put out dis fag ish
And im not tryin ta talk trash and get off da subject
But you just another reject,who loves ta ride on plenty of dick

hotshh! has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-04-05 07:45 PM.

aint even been on, my bad, quick key


Suicide was on ya mind, aint have the heart to pull a Wesson
knew HOTSHH! would murder him so he gave me 2 mil to check in
dont even Try,you a internet thug everything you Speak is a Lie
I told graph to SPIT something...da nigga said my mouth too dry
In this game you lames R Better Moving.....my Aim is Retribution
Graph, you too stupid to live...damn... Im Ashamed of Evolution
U dont want no 'beef'...Talk Grease? U similar to a veggie freak
Like babies with no arms when U dropped U was Already Weak
Hope you wouldnt bleed 4 a vic , with me it could be Gallons
cuz Graph's about as big a thug on this site....as Woody Allen
Im causing Havoc... you'll elevate when u get tossed in Attics
Get Outlawed from the site cuz like ya name..this Loss is GRAPHic
So gassed... Ya Brain'll Fart...... paint pictures?.. I Frame the Art
cuz like GAMES girl on dat show you should ve had a CHANGE OF HEART

aint even been on, my bad, quick key


Suicide was on ya mind, aint have the heart to pull a Wesson
knew HOTSHH! would murder him so he gave me 2 mil to check in
dont even Try,you a internet thug everything you Speak is a Lie
I told graph to SPIT something...da nigga said my mouth too dry
In this game you lames R Better Moving.....my Aim is Retribution
Graph, you too stupid to live...damn... Im Ashamed of Evolution
U dont want no 'beef'...Talk Grease? U similar to a veggie freak
Like babies with no arms when U dropped U was Already Weak
Hope you wouldnt bleed 4 a vic , with me it could be Gallons
cuz Graph's about as big a thug on this site....as Woody Allen
Im causing Havoc... you'll elevate when u get tossed in Attics
Just been Outlawed from the site cuz like ya name..dis Loss is GRAPHic
So gassed kid... Ya Brain'll Fart...... paint pictures?.. I Frame the Art
cuz like GAMES girl on dat show you should ve had a CHANGE OF HEART
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finally lol ya dropped....pretty dope shit hommie...uppin this...

uppppnnnn.........

checkin polls biotches good lucks to both tho ight

uppin for some votes..............................

uppin for some votes.......

Voted For: .Grafh.

Suicide was on ya mind, aint have the heart to pull a Wesson
knew HOTSHH! would murder him so he gave me 2 mil to check in
^^^
dosent make sens,e you said ''he knew i'd murder him so he gave me 2 mil ta check in''....why would he know your gonna beat him an pay u ta battle for a loss?

dont even Try,you a internet thug everything you Speak is a Lie
I told graph to SPIT something...da nigga said my mouth too dry
^^^
thats pretty decent tho, nothin special, but the punch in the second line was alright

In this game you lames R Better Moving.....my Aim is Retribution
Graph, you too stupid to live...damn... Im Ashamed of Evolution
^^^
not bad, not bad at all, second line once again kinda hit hard, decent stuff

U dont want no 'beef'...Talk Grease? U similar to a veggie freak
Like babies with no arms when U dropped U was Already Weak
ah, this time around ya flow was nice, but the 1st line connected harder, second line was a little boring an not very creative

Hope you wouldnt bleed 4 a vic , with me it could be Gallons
cuz Graph's about as big a thug on this site....as Woody Allen
^^
okat stuff once again, but just average, i exect better from you

m causing Havoc... you'll elevate when u get tossed in Attics
Just been Outlawed from the site cuz like ya name..dis Loss is GRAPHic
^^^
could have definately used a better way ta play off his name, but it was still okay, just could have been alot better

So gassed kid... Ya Brain'll Fart...... paint pictures?.. I Frame the Art
cuz like GAMES girl on dat show you should ve had a CHANGE OF HEART
^^^
build up line was dope
an i could see what ya tried ta do, use GAME cause its the talk on RV right now, maybe could have woirded it better

sorry i got this far, an i dont wanna analyze Grafths verse bar by bar
so i'll brake it down

Grafth, ya had alot more creativity, for insatnce...

Rv tired of ya,since ya recylce more lines den smarterchild
Ya da gaytype ta press pause on b-rabbits ass on 8mile
^^^
like that
Very creative
an although many use 8 mile in they lyrics, you bough a new dimension too it, ya feel?
nice shit

overrall ya had alot more creative ideas, not many of the bars hit in this battle like they should have, Hotshh, ya worded ya verse all wrong in places, but in others it was some decent stuff, ya had nice ideas, just used them wrong in this battle, thats my opinnon anyway

Grafth, ya was much morwe consistant, an every line i read, i didnt really know what was coming next, an thats the best way ta entertain in battles, so u get my vote

Peace out oh an RTF

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[QUOTE=Buck.Shot]Voted For: .Grafh.

Suicide was on ya mind, aint have the heart to pull a Wesson
knew HOTSHH! would murder him so he gave me 2 mil to check in
^^^
dosent make sens,e you said ''he knew i'd murder him so he gave me 2 mil ta check in''....why would he know your gonna beat him an pay u ta battle for a loss?


^^^^read the 1st line....suicide was on his mind, aint have the heart to shoot himself....knew i would kill him, so he paid me two mil to make sure i checked in to kill him, he really did pay me 2 mil just to check in, i wrote this in like 15 minutes, but damn buck, you had to hate vote on me?

uppin for votes.....

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