Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate Votes
No D/R
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-03-05 at 06:27 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Lyriclesolja has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-03-05 04:31 PM.

Kesse has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-03-05 04:42 PM.

afraid to show your real record, i guess for a 'solja' your pretty brave
for you this battle is like a war, you'll be getting a cross on your grave
your user title says 'im deep', im thinking your some kind of mole
cause with all those losses you really have, your in one giant hole
im guessing poetry is your area, but i think your bullshitting, to be frank
because a true writer is always writing, and in your sig, the notebook is blank
if your in this to see how many battles you can lose, your already into the fame
and its not like it will get any better, cause you can't even spell your own name
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explans:
-line 2 cross on the grave, like an X through the battle...a loss basically
-his real records 9-22 or sump
-everythin else should be easy

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yo enouph of his wack ass back lash shananagins,
silicone ally Mcbeal his style aint real he a manakin,
out of his league he a priest passin a round of drinks brian flannagin*,
and he cant speak like a crippled dude tryina do the two step wit no feet,
he a lyricle cripple it aint hard to realize its simple,
stuck ma dick in his mouth now he got a dimple,
his rhymes are scary like the facial skin of john kerry,
folded and wrinkled his face is oiley he ate to many pringles.


Brain Flannagin-Tom Cruse in Cock Tails......hence he's a bartender..

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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

..................upppppppppppppppin..............

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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

poll checkin..........

Voted For: Kesse

kesse took this battle for actually rhymin......he had harder hittin punches dat rhymed n shit..
solja ur verse waz goin good but u waznt rhymin wit shit yo....u would build up dis nice ass punch n den say some shit at da end dat didnt even rhyme....u gotta fix that and you'll b straight...........
kesse return da favor
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...91&page=1&pp=15
im up 4-0 against lord.wun pleaze get dat shit closed out yo

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Voted For: Kesse

Gotta go wit Kesse on this one, punches were harder, didn't like the structure that much, but LyricalSolja didn't come with nothin really, so Kesse took it.

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........word, not really explained.....but, feeds always great.......upppin.

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

............uppppinnnnnnnnnn......................

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