aight seven here's your links..
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...25&postcount=12

http://community.rapverse.com/showp...434&postcount=9

http://community.rapverse.com/showp...37&postcount=29

http://community.rapverse.com/showp...45&postcount=11


like i said before-
basically my computer was actin like a bitch the night of the due date so i'm posting here and yea i kno u the mod of this Seven but kiss my ass, skater hoe, hop on a ramp and break your neck.. Anywayz, I originally had a verse wit more disses to POP LOTTY than i do now, but Seven been workin my nerves ahead of time so i put more JUST FOR HIS CRISPY ass.. so here it is.. the lyrics are written in soundclick.. thanx diabolic for the verse-mix, other production was me, so spare it, por favor

www.soundclick.com/ladyfiya

click the first song and click the lyrics to follow along enjoy kiddies

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^^that second verse was actually the outtro.. there was no second verse.. thanx tho

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lmfao@the 6 million ways to die part ahahhahaha killed it

Typing as I listen: Loop points on the beat in the intro are obvious as hell. It's pulled from a sample that comes as 2 bars and it was looped from there. The fact thta I can detect that is definitely a bad thing. Shoulda zoomed in and patched that one. Beat is dope. I can't make out JACK SHIT you said on the intro (that ended up being your chorus) Muffled as shit. Coulda opened it up better with some EQing. First 4 bars were off flow. Some came back on, then off again on the back half. Damn, way off. The lyrics and emotion was there, but the flow was way off. You had a completely different pace than the beat which brought this down bigtime.

The audio quality on the portions that you spoke on are all different. The chorus is different from the verse and the verse is different from the convo at the end. It almost sounds liek you recorded this on three different mics. All in all a "pretty good" track that needed more to be a "great" track. As a battler, if this track were aimed at me personally, there's a shitload of things in this track I'd seek and destroy. Uno.

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Aight, im just gonna speak the real on this an y'all can go fuck yourselves if you don't like it. 7/3rd i got love for cause he do his thizzle and he reppin' 845, and niggaz can't fuck wit that. And fluid and pop do they thang too. Fiya came wit madd emotion on this song. I think she has amazing talent and needs to work on the quality of her recordings soundwise and the inflection on her words so they clearer. That bein said, bein' a nigga that loves women and loves hip-hop, (here's the part that might sound fucked up, but if you really love those two things, i think niggaz will understand). Hearing this girl rap is so fuckin' sexy to me, i can't even describe. Her emotion is very i dunno, riveting. It is the sexiest thing to know that this girl is fine as hell, and madd talented in rap. I know Fiya, so i told her this already, but felt i needed to post it. Stay up baby girl, nice drop.

-CJ-

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The track for the most part was good....the mixing in all honesty took away from this track....some of ya vocals sounded over filtered....your flow was good for most of track it was a lil off sometimes.....also if u gon flow fast like dat u need tempo changes that are more drastic...u would slow up a lil but not enough to really make da flow super ill...delivery was good.....sometimes you sounded pissed an other times it sounded more like yelling....but good for most part.....lyrics was on point an comical<--alsways a nice addition in disses...rolmfao@the outro..stay ma'...........1

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I heard a line about Degree in there...and in your lyrics you said it was your favorite line

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i said degree as in college degree i said he wouldn't get a degree if his college had his high school transcripts.. he dropped outta high school and went to college.. to get a bachelors you are gonna need your high school transcripts.. so no that was not a diss to you, 9th.. i fixed the volume levels but i'mma have to re-record my verse when my throat clears, i had a hard time tryna do that alone.. i'm loving the feedback i kno what to work on.. yay

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wow.

Thats All I can say. Pleasantly suprised.....
Your a female version of Jet.

Hit me up on AIM. CarsonJetX2
Or Just PM this Name....not my old one...(no x2)

We have to collab on summin.-1

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The opposite of LatinKitten.

i never thought i would hear that from you... thanx and your crew members hate my fuckin guts lol... thanx fa the feedback CALI? i thought u were still hatin my guts too wow.. and thanx everybody else.. i'm glad to hear i improved that's all i really wanted. uppin this 1

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ROFL at the end *dies*

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Proud OYD member again . <------- That is whassup

Wow, yeah nice drop this was hot...

I was laughin at the end when u was talkin in the outtro and the singin part... lol...

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Listen Hahahaha See This What I Been Telling You To Do Good That Even Though You Curse Me Out I Know You Listen To Meflow Is Dope Fuck Them Haters Doomsday Is A Seven D.r Anyways And A Queer Good Drop Here Chrous Is Dope You Mixing Is Horrible Ill Help You Wit That On Aim I Dont Wanna Give No Secrets Away But I Know What You Need For Ya Shit To Be Better Now To The Song Flow And Punches And Personals Were Dope You Sound Like Shawna I Like This Flow I Been Told You This Good Shit Here Real Nice Overall 6 Million Ways To Die!!hahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahha hahahha Omg I Wish I Could Sig That Hahahahahhahaha Good Drop You Wouldve Beat Seven If You Dropped

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