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6 - 8 Lines
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-04-05 at 11:22 PM

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tranz$cript has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-04-05 10:52 PM.

Murdz has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-04-05 10:55 PM.

heres how im gonna do u imma flip tha script...
u prolly sukkin dick as much as i chop bricks...
ill hit u so fast leave u full of rigamortis....
and show these peeps how short yer career is ...
u aint got no style u aint got no flow.....
my rymes and style r sikker than tha movie phyco...
but this battle is done,so is yer debut son....
and now ill pop my collar like ill pop my gun.......
chea uppin yall

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transkript I'll beat you close to death and leave you like a vegetable..
Your wins are like your sexuality...that shit is Questionable..
If ya look deep into my heart you'll see That the hood spits there..
I'll treat ya face like hollywood cement and leave my footprints there..
this pussy, Transkript claimin he’s hot, when this kid is clearly a mess..
cause I'm slammin your back, leavin spinal imprints on ya chest..
With pigments ruptured, I slit n cut ya with twisted thunder..
And leave ya bones in fragments...like ya sentence structure..

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comeon guyz dont sleep on dis... uppin on dis battle

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Voted For: Murdz

murdz took dis one
trans-your verse was real basic and simple didnt really have any vocab....punches were good but didnt hit hard enuff...you gotta throw a lil creativity up in your verse....
mur-u had da betta vocab n erry thing in ya verse...da nice punches...da more complex verse dat's y u got my vote

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...002446&posted=1

return the favor on that^^me vs. mista authentiq

Voted For: Murdz

oh shit... this was a good verse for a newbie(no offense)...
aye look... murdz got this one
his flow was tight and the rhyme scheme was pretty good.
he wasn't all punches, but his lines came pretty hard. i like the humor involved in this drop! haha
overall, he just had good line after good line. this shows u dont need all punches to win a battle. the finisher was hott... it went right along with his battle stucture, hahah
transcript... u had a decent verse. ur flow was pretty nice too but ur only problem was that u didnt come hard enough. there was no punches or real disses involved in ya verse.
and the little self glorification u did kinda hurt ur verse...
w/e
V/ Murdz

Voted For: Murdz

V/murdz....this was a good battle but murdz gets my vote he had good consistent original punchs wit good structure he had some personals...tranz u had some good lines but ur diss's werent consistent an u had some played lines...no hate good battle to both..RETURN THE FAVOR....
opener=m
closer=m
structure=tie
punchs=m
personals=m
vocab=m
overall=Murdz

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thanks for the votes..... comeon uppin on this shit...

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Voted For: Murdz

Aii This Is What Is Is

Transcript

heres how im gonna do u imma flip tha script...
u prolly sukkin dick as much as i chop bricks...
Flip the whats?.....Chop who?......No Punch There
ill hit u so fast leave u full of rigamortis....
and show these peeps how short yer career is ...
Regormortis.......is........Dont ryme ......And regormtise is A SLOW procees when ya body freezes over after death........So How you gonna fill somebody with regormortis?
Your not that smart are you
u aint got no style u aint got no flow.....
my rymes and style r sikker than tha movie phyco...
......Nope........
but this battle is done,so is yer debut son....
and now ill pop my collar like ill pop my gun.......
Pop My collar Like I Pop My Gun?......SO PLAYED

Murdz

transkript I'll beat you close to death and leave you like a vegetable..
Your wins are like your sexuality...that shit is Questionable..
Nice opener
If ya look deep into my heart you'll see That the hood spits there..
I'll treat ya face like hollywood cement and leave my footprints there..
LOL Damn I NEver Heard tHat B4 .....Original
this pussy, Transkript claimin he’s hot, when this kid is clearly a mess..
cause I'm slammin your back, leavin spinal imprints on ya chest..
Um....Not All That Compared to ya othet verses
With pigments ruptured, I slit n cut ya with twisted thunder..
And leave ya bones in fragments...like ya sentence structure..
...Aii Closer....Nice Job

Overall: MurdzYou did Farily Well I Think That YoU take this battle becuas you Atleast connected with a punch and you brough some originality to this battle and thats what I Like to see


PLEASE RTF PLEASE LInx in my sig

Voted For: Murdz

aiight yo murdz ge thtis..LOL his structure was wayyyyy better and his punches hit pretty hard..your flow was nice and the personals was aiight..only seen a couple though....this verse was pretty...nice..uve elevated alot!

trans: that shit was wayy too basic ur punches werent hittin nobody but hurtin urself...ur flow was ok...ur personals...blah....overall this verse wasnt that good...

vote: murdz

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