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or jus click on my sig.....this song is basicaly about my self its a reflection of my life and sum things i went through when i was young....i hope u like this....and yes i know sum spots my flow is off


i left feed back on Tha q's " The Return" and on Lethal Gk 's " The Intro"

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smooth beat, reminds me of some old school rap...........but some of the kicks sound off..................your flow is off, you hit it sometimes but that is a real easy beat to ride.............deep emotional shit....................not feeling the hook, it was ok, just needed some wording, the back in the day part when you just say it, but when you do the hook with the dr. part, you need to remix the wording on that and try and make it more catchy, you have some work to do, but it has potential........hit me if you get the chance


hit me when you get the chance
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179850

iight listenin as I type....

buildup is short, not bad, I like the way the beat kicks in, flow is... way above average, consistent, kinda reminds me of enygma's delivery, I like your voice... story tellin is pretty good, sounds like ur flow kinda slips a little bit in a couple places, but all in all definately a decent track.... i'd like to collab wit u sometime...1

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cudda stood for more mic presence here...

delivery was the best on this track...flow was aiight...lyrics were good


i liked it...would be dope with more presence


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uppin.........,.

this track is dope, you have a great voice, your delivery as you know is off in parts, but your lyrics,wow, dope track man, love the beat, its smooth, keep it up, this was definitaley one of the better tracks i've heard in awhile...1

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ok....first off flow is straight...but rhyme scheme is pretty simple...wit only end rhymes..i can only hear a lil bit of multis...and u wasnt on snare...some lines were to long...i dont care about the beat but if u want to kno it aint that good to me...lyrics is ok...i cant really judge ckuz its about ya life and i dont kno u so yea...ROFLROFLROFLROFL...omfg...u rushed the hell out of that damn line..ROFL

man dat was funny ckuz everything just speed up hella fast..

i hear hella hiss as well..

and i cant really tell the difference between the chorus and the verse...

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