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Old 03-12-05, 06:08 AM   #1
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The Situation New Shit

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TonySelfs Tremendiss verse

I admmit 1st 2 verses flows a lil choppy coz they were writ to a different beat but i wasn't feelin it so i switched beats...plus this was done quite late so that bastard tiredness got into effect -_- anyway...
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Old 03-12-05, 11:31 AM   #2
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The beat is different from the usual beats peeps be using here.. but i like it.. your right, your first 2 verses are not only a lil choppy.. but really off flow man.. no offense.. but yea.. ur chorus is okay.. but not really catchy.. but its cool cuz it would be hard to think of a chorus with this beat.. but your last verse was good.. but it sounds like you wern't really into the beat.. and your delivery must be better man.. but just show energy wen you do another song.. cuz i wasn't really feeling it.. no offense but this i wut i give you.. 4/10.. just wut i think dude.. no beef iight?? but still better then some other peeps that do audio here..

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Old 03-13-05, 02:20 AM   #3
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The beat is different from the usual beats peeps be using here.. but i like it.. your right, your first 2 verses are not only a lil choppy.. but really off flow man.. no offense.. but yea.. ur chorus is okay.. but not really catchy.. but its cool cuz it would be hard to think of a chorus with this beat.. but your last verse was good.. but it sounds like you wern't really into the beat.. and your delivery must be better man.. but just show energy wen you do another song.. cuz i wasn't really feeling it.. no offense but this i wut i give you.. 4/10.. just wut i think dude.. no beef iight?? but still better then some other peeps that do audio here..

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Na ya right i'm still rusty as fuck i played this over again and i wasn't feelin it the beats good but to me it's like one of those beats that don't need vocals so ima take this off my s/click coz it was meh...but i might keep the lyrics though coz there are beats which should fit this like whoa...close this Seven
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Old 03-13-05, 11:15 AM   #4
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quality..mayn,...shit was good though...you alwayz have the original topics that im feelin naww sayin..so im feelin it in that way..flow is koo.....lyrics is koo..overall this is a koo track
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Old 10-19-05, 04:31 AM   #5
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again old ish...not many posts...uppin
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Old 10-19-05, 10:27 AM   #6
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Flow is cool...am feelin it....shit thats holdin alot of cats is quality.....upgrade yo equipment u gonna come out nice....
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Old 10-19-05, 12:04 PM   #7
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lol i took it down now...coz personally i didn't like this track...might re-make it but thanks for that feed
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