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Old 03-12-05, 10:05 AM   #1
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DAMN...MAN...YA HAD TO OPEN UP YA FACE DIDNT U

Im whack!? homie ya shit aint gettin any feed back
Every one look at "simple message" and see that/
Hes a bitter hes fake he cant take when he gets sicked on
Picked on every line he says is ripped off but in this song/
This is the real lyrics homie be real buck shot ya cant be serious
Intemental aint got no lyrics like an instrumental u delriuos/
U takein to many drugs what u gonna do when u see thugs stopmin u
Rompin u in nikes u wanna be like me fudge packer naw i aint copyin u/
Cause my open mics get mad reviews and ya shit cant get two
Ya mom said u the greatest emcee so u think it must be true/
First floor yeah im comin for u,little boys cant beat a man
Ya could be the last dude on earth and u still couldnt be the man/
Im dropin nuclear bombs i gota take a shit so im gonna do it on u
Sit on u shit on u ill have every member of S.I.N get on u/
And that anint no e-crew cause i see trough i know they aint fam
Ill put a gat to 1st floor genral leave wholes the size of paint can/
Come dwag yall never get dats cause ya ass is gonna get clapped
That last open mic of urs aint gettin ya jack cause every words crap/
Basic rhymes this aint no basic times this the new rap
Concvicts a bitter but first floor already kenw that/
This shits gonna get ten outa ten here we go again and again
I merk bitches i hurt bitches and i dont need to bite eminem/
To say that the first three letters in convict is con
Cause he cant wirte his own material to put in his song/
He tricks ya u cal him on it he dises ya thats a bitch move
Yo buck shot how come every other day u alwasy switch crews/
I dont know whats ya brain malfuction its probably split like a juction
Tell ya famialy not to go out side cause bitch they facein abduction/
Pray i dont find were u house is rip up ya blouses and exspose u bitch
I already proved convicted is phonie now im gonna exspose ya clique/
This shit wasnt so suppose to blow to a full out war but thats what we facein
They call them selves first floor cause thats where they stay at the days inn/

(HOOK)1x
Im headin to the V.I.P lounge
Where bitches like yall aint found
This is first class shit
Im bein real yall never pass this
This is way beyond ya chomprehension
This is for ya own good ya whack this is the intervention
(HOOK)1x

I tryed to be nice bout this but now this is all out lyricall combat
These mutha fuckas couldnt see me if they had miracle contacts/
This is on that nail in the coffin...hit em up...check mate shit
5 stars...Ten out of Ten...5 mics yeah thats how ya gonna rate this/
Im a choke artist (WHAT!) I aint b rabbit mutha fucka u want some static
Mention my name one more time in one more rhyme and ill be right back at it/
Watin for u to drop anthoer bull shit verse is just a tactic
So i can smash it with my fan-fuckin-tastic/
Lyrics see u just pissed cause u know ull alwasy hear it
Ya fear it cause ya know ya no where near it/
U couldnt see me if u had binaculors to both ya oculirs
Im way past ya basic rhyme scheme im chargin u like a rhinsoris/
Ya flows like something from prehistoric ya dont hear any more of it
Every ones bored of it im bringin the new shit every one adores it/
Yall never be as ill as me even if u never admit it i know u feelin me
Cause when i drop an open mic every RV member reads it so diligently/
They just pass urs by like a dude begin for change
Fuck all that gun talkin mutha fucka Hip-Hops begin for change/
And u aint the one to bring it i got yall hooked and aint no one singin
And homie i hope ya realize this will never die this is just the begging/

(HOOK)1x
Im headin to the V.I.P lounge
Where bitches like yall aint found
This is first class shit
Im bein real yall never pass this
This is way beyond ya chomprehension
This is for ya own good ya whack this is the intervention
(HOOK)1x

Ure like Christopher Reves if u stand up to me u go right to ure knees
Yo, convicted hope ya know i “X-cellorated”and bitch i can still breath/
Homie i aint ever gonna leave this fire aint never gonna cease
as long as im here there aint never gonna be peace/
This is war now yeah ya want some ill chew u up and spit u out
Yo, buck i now know why ya change crews cause they all kicked u out/
I cant take u serious u a comedian
I can see ya dead like a median/
Im through ive proved to you that i am not at all intemidated
Thats it cause i know that these First Floor bitches is elimanated/

WHAT NOW!
I JUST PROMOTED YA ASSES CAUSE YA NAMELESS YA SHIT AINT
GETTIN ANY FEEDBACK ANY ONE WHO WANTS IT BRING IT IM WAITIN
FOR A RESPONSE........
AND BUCK SHOT I AINT NEVER HAD A PROBLEM WITH U I NEVER
WANTED TO DISS U PUT U HAD TO OPEN YA MOUTH.......WHOS IN YA EAR!
LIL BITCH FUCK WITH ME AGAIN SEE WHAT U GET
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Old 03-12-05, 10:12 AM   #2
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Yo, buck i now know why ya change crews cause they all kicked u out/
I cant take u serious u a comedian
I can see ya dead like a median/
^^^^^
lol an you call me a comedian?????????????

do you honestly expect people ta read that an actually comment....

you had about 30 maybe more bars of useless, punchless, garbage rhymes....
10 out of 10 for effort, an 10 out of 10 for wasting your time

besides that....
from what i read which was highly amusing but not in the way you would like
i give it
a whoppin 4/10
nice......................................
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Old 03-12-05, 10:14 AM   #3
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Never had a problem with me?
Idiot, you pm'd redbull an asked him ta diss me in O.M wit;'chu....

wonder why he never replied?
hmmmm
maybe cause of this peice he didnt, he knew what ya had ta offer an knew i'd murder ya little ass...
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Old 03-12-05, 10:34 AM   #4
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i never pmed his ass i aint never heard of u till like 5 days ago when the fuck did that happen show me the pm and ill give u my range piece of shit well see
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Old 03-12-05, 10:35 AM   #5
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and i called u a comedian cause u a joke no one takes u serious ur wack kid ya lines are stretched basic rhymes u aint cant see me dwag
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Old 03-12-05, 10:36 AM   #6
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He told me you you pm'd him.....
he hates me, so why the fuck would he lie?
yoiu little ho

ya whacked out
i just dissed you quicker than you could even type the post above this one i am typing now

I freestyled a little verse that put this 1 ta shame
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Old 03-12-05, 10:54 AM   #7
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i hate the establishment why would i pm the leader of it to help me
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Old 03-12-05, 10:58 AM   #8
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u dont know when to shut up do u..................
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Old 03-12-05, 11:03 AM   #9
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.........wanna battle?
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Old 03-12-05, 11:39 AM   #10
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i aint even gone lie, this drop was bull shit
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Old 03-12-05, 11:52 AM   #11
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Sorry X-Cell Buck got you but Tony Green gives you a 10 for effort but the drop 5/10!
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Old 03-12-05, 01:00 PM   #12
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ight i respect yalls opinons and i freed this in like 10 mins except for the hook i allredy had that...but this it aint the end of it im workin on an new track that well shock all yall
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