message and glass
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a message in a bottle arrives at my doorstep
floated here by you
across a ocean of fear and hate
the message full of
hope
love
and pain
hope: of being opened
love- of life itself
pain~from regection
becuz i dont read the message... i just see you...
you have drowned in the ocean of fear and hate

i see your lifeless body at my doorstep and melt with sadness
you died for me
shot down by a driving "messenger"
u were in the worng place at the wrong time
trying to solve our problem
which one... i dont know

for when you fell struck down by lifes cruel ending
the bottle was broken
now all i can see is red and wet w/ tears
a message of ur end
surrounded by shards of glass
and a corpse now cold
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y is everyone sleeping?

Dizam...thats deep
I almost drowned in your emotions girl....keep it up that joint was tight
your name should be *Poetic Justice*...lol..hot

hey thanx 4 the reply... glad ya got sum emotion outa it...~much love ~poetic justice lol... ~

Damnz gurl ... this was raw ...
U poured ur emotions into dis,

Props

O~N~E

LEAH!!! WHAT HAPPENED???? DAMMIT, IM BACK AND I NEED TO KNOW WHAT CAUSED THIS PEICE! (which by the way is FUCKING AWESME) i loved this peice... truly awesome with good emotions... awesome emotions.... the imagry was amazin... keep it flowin and when i call u today u BETTER FREEKIN EXPLAIN! lol