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X-CELL 5 100.00%
Effect 0 0%
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Old 03-16-05, 10:30 AM   #1
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Old 03-16-05, 10:32 AM   #2
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Effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-16-05 10:32 AM.
 
Old 03-16-05, 10:33 AM   #3
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Old 03-16-05, 10:33 AM   #4
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X-CELL I leave ya exposed your not going to win
if you ever won a fuckin battle it would be a sin
packin no puches i'll leave your ass decapitated
your so poor man ya run around home naked
your just fake kid life seems to be ya trouble
dyslexic fool got dissabilitys he seems to struggle
my flow raps over ya as if it was a fuckin cobra
strangles ya till I knock you bitch over
he drives a nover his mind seems to a little slow
god fuckin hates you he tried to murder u hoe!
no one wanna hear a faggot so put the mic away
gays get played and ya stay fake to the game
bitch your lame should have a bullet in ya brain
talk so much shit anybody would think ya on cocain
stupid guy think ya wise till I make ya parolized
i'll make ya a blind bitch stab a needles in ya eyes
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Old 03-16-05, 11:02 AM   #5
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ya scared ya cant see me u visually impared
ya could be a priest and ya still wont have a prayer/
to win this.....ya punch lines are way to simplistic
this mutha fucka cant even rap a present for christmas/
hes fast to duck quick fuckin bitch afrid to fight and his avy proves it
come on dwag be honest ya couldnt throw a punch if u was lenix lewis/
mine have u layed out...ya flow is like jeans they get faded
hes tellin people to shut the fuck cause hes sick of bein hated/
he cant take it bout to cry get this kid a tissue
in ya open mic “dont care bout nothing”ya thinkin ya dose every one diss u/
just use them same lines u re-use im gonna end ya shit and no one gonna miss u
dwag u could be the april magaizine of the XXL and u still wont be an issue/
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Old 03-16-05, 12:05 PM   #6
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Old 03-16-05, 12:31 PM   #7
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i thought this was a close battle...

X-cell i thought you had a good verse jus work on your structure.. your punches were good and you had alot of good vocab. overall you had a really good drop.. fam work' on ya spelling a bit.. looks like u was jus typ'n this shit to fast.. but yea you had good punches and personals.. nice drop

Effect- you also had a good verse your vocab was not up to par .. but you had some strong punches and weak punches.. over all though i though you coulda worked on your vocab and your punches.. go and elevate a little .. nice job though

Vote//X-Cell- over all i'm gonna give this to X-Cell you jus came harder and had better punches and personals over all . your metas were a tad bit played but u worded em alright ...


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Old 03-16-05, 12:45 PM   #8
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thanks for the vote man.......and.......to the top bitches
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Old 03-16-05, 01:47 PM   #9
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Old 03-16-05, 01:53 PM   #10
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aiight this was a weak battle but x-cell got this..he had better vocab and alot better punches...effect had better structure but the punches were wayyy tooo basic, and i wasnt feelin em at all......x cells shit was aiight...

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Old 03-16-05, 02:22 PM   #11
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Old 03-16-05, 02:52 PM   #12
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Old 03-16-05, 06:21 PM   #13
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wow both of you are horrible, but X-Cell at least made attempts at punches your X-Cell ur structure and flow is horrible, Effect you had no punches in ur battle what so ever both of u need to elevate but X-cell if u shorten ur lins and dont put this / in ur verses. u wouldnt seem half as bad.. but u still had played out punches.. like the rap a present line.. thats horrible played.. but u still get this due to the fact u had some punches in ur verse...
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Old 03-16-05, 08:27 PM   #14
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X Cell


ya scared ya cant see me u visually impared
ya could be a priest and ya still wont have a prayer/
to win this.....ya punch lines are way to simplistic
this mutha fucka cant even rap a present for christmas/
hes fast to duck quick fuckin bitch afrid to fight and his avy proves it
come on dwag be honest ya couldnt throw a punch if u was lenix lewis/
mine have u layed out...ya flow is like jeans they get faded
hes tellin people to shut the fuck cause hes sick of bein hated/
he cant take it bout to cry get this kid a tissue
in ya open mic “dont care bout nothing”ya thinkin ya dose every one diss u/
just use them same lines u re-use im gonna end ya shit and no one gonna miss u
dwag u could be the april magaizine of the XXL and u still wont be an issue/

nice verse
like disses and punches against opponent
good elevation
iight structure
8.5/10

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X-CELL I leave ya exposed your not going to win
if you ever won a fuckin battle it would be a sin
packin no puches i'll leave your ass decapitated
your so poor man ya run around home naked
your just fake kid life seems to be ya trouble
dyslexic fool got dissabilitys he seems to struggle
my flow raps over ya as if it was a fuckin cobra

iight iight not bad
jus a few bad lines...."run around house naked"
mmmmmmmm No!
good structure though
few punches
less than opponent
work on elevatin

my v/x-cell
strangles ya till I knock you bitch over
he drives a nover his mind seems to a little slow
god fuckin hates you he tried to murder u hoe!
no one wanna hear a faggot so put the mic away
gays get played and ya stay fake to the game
bitch your lame should have a bullet in ya brain
talk so much shit anybody would think ya on cocain
stupid guy think ya wise till I make ya parolized
i'll make ya a blind bitch stab a needles in ya eyes
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Old 03-19-05, 11:40 AM   #15
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X-Cell- Verse was nice...so was your punches....Had some nice lil personals also....Structure was decent...easy to read n all...but overall your won this with a better overall verse and punches...8.6/10........

Effect- your verse was nice a little, but your punches really didnt seem to connect hard enough...your structure was layed out nice...but you went weak on punches thats all...5.9/10.......

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