www.soundclick.com/realskills - my last breath draft (thanks DQ 4 uploadin it )

^feed fam

its jus a draft, not edited (vocals are way too loud....) jus want too know if ppl feelin tha concept etc...

oh and i re-edited SENSE OF DESPAIR - peep that.......

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You sound a little like DV. Not a bad concept. I think the beat might be a little off for what you are trying to put across. Maybe that's just because I was gonna use this beat for a more uplifting song. Anyway, you need to lose the Echo.....badly. It's killing your shit. Just polish it up a bit ™

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listening:
beat is cool
i love the chorus,nice verse's,i love this song man,just the echo,take them off,but very good,imma download this,the quality is good,nice man

yea this was a solid track, i liked the beat and the chorus was good, just had minor mixing mishaps, just work on that and everything will be str8, like enygma said,the echo isnt working for you, you'd sound much better without it, keep dropping..1

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ahhh acuity comin wit anotha track ill shit right here imma have to play it again delivery is hittin hard u doing good....u got mad potential to make it if thats what your plan is...nice shit ..the whole fuckin topic is dope....and can't wait to hear the final product. just like everone said tho..just use ya voice..ur voice nice enough as it is u feel me?

thanx 4 tha feed y'all.....look slike the echo is ...k cool was firsttime i tried it but can see it aint work

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i like this, you sound better than any u.k emcee on this site so far, and the echo didn't bother me, it gave it an andre 3000 type sound, im feelin the direction you went, delivery is good for the most part couple slips, but all in all i liked this, keep droppin em.

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^^haha siggin that shit to tha max!!!!! lol

i aint even lieing look i sigged it lol

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ok...i dont know if im feelin this beat or not for the lyrics...lyrics are good though...the echo didnt bother me any at all...delivery was nice...and yes..you are 30 times better than any uk rapper ive heard on this site...quality was halfway decent...keep on droppin em...

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alrite, lets peep. its got a nyce beat but i dunno about this ecko shit goin on. it gives off a wierd feel. i mean at least the song has a topic but it coulda been on point a lil more. i like the transition when it goes to the chorus. i like how the beat changes. i dunno about this one, the flow isnt precise but its aight. you'll elevate. keep risin. peep a track n leave me some feed.

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