Replied to Doomsday's track and Tha Q's track ™

Just having fun on a track. I heard this beat by E.C so I tweaked it a little. I still give full credit to him though ™

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Leave some feedback....

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Didn't really like the beat

First verse was good, the lyrics were good, and the start of a few lines had the timing off and sounded jumbled at the end

2nd verse was also good but had the same timing issues

3rd verse was good but also had the timing issues

Really that’s the only bad thing was the fact that some lines were too long so you jumbled words and made it sound rushed but that happens to everyone but other then that it was good, keep droppin'

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beat isnt too bad but you can tell it aint a professional beat justdoesn't have that polished feel.....

lyrics is cool, rhymeschem is not simplistisc which is cool, your flow is good, falls off a lil, hook is cool works well to the beat..lma @ "hit utr bitch ...tonsels.." bar is funny.....deres some nice originality in this...track overall is pretty solid...a more polished beat would have brang it out tho

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=182539 - RTF

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i like the beat, you have a nice, catchy crisp sound to your tracks, your lyrics are dope...the only thing i can say i dont like,is your delivery is constantly the same in every track,i'd like to hear you go nuts on a track, because your emotion is so strong, maybe take more risks..but you definately moving in the right direction..1

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Listening...

Quality sounds good. Starts off flowin real nicely. Get's a little choppy as it goes on. Chorus is ehhhh, doesn't flow well enough IMO. Second verse was choppy too. =/ But it starts getting better. I like the beat yo. Third verse starts niiiiiiiice. Delivery could be just a BIT better nah sayen?

Overall it pretty coo, like....8/10

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vocal quality is clear...good there

beat is kinda kooky = blah

ur flow is good here

a couple delivery issues...

but I liked the hook sequence...


I'd say this is a good track


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RTV please

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=182681

i can't stand this beat, especially for your flow... some bars i was feelin, but some just fought with the beat and I couldn't get into it all together... not my type of shit I guess, keep droppin.

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Thanks for the feed. I was trying to please everyone else by slowing down the flow a bit, but I guess it just doesn't work for me. I didn't think it sounded that great, but I wanted others opinions on it. I actually did like the beat though ™

I am in serious need of help for my Chorus' though. I severly suck at them and if anyone can help....it would be greatly appreciated ™

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yalls verses was too good for this beat alot of people aint gonna feel the track cause all they care about is the beat, but the wordplay in this is hott, and the way you flip the words is perfect

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i been an enygma fan for a bit i guess you could say. seen you elevate alot in this year. i like the flow, sometiems it goes off a lil bit but you make it work n thats all that matters, tea bag line was coo. definately got ur own style. i like the beat alot. chorus is on point i like those little noises in the background during tha chorus. the second verse comes hard. we should hit up a collab in the future. peep a track n leave some feed.

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........................................i dunno if i like this song......your lyrics are too gud for this beat......

i was feelinthe lyrics.. but the beat was kinda bleh,, and the chorus was ehhhh na mean.. lmao right after the tea-bag.. but i liked the joint.. good job.. was feeling eeet

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o.k this was pretty good, i liked the beat unitl the hook, no feelin that part but apart from that the beat was original, ur flow was very good as usual, plenty of multis in there, lyrics were also dope on the most part, presense is still improvin but was good for the type of track

verdict - not ur best due to the hook and various other little aspects but overall another nice track

can you return the fav with some feed on this plz -
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=183561

peace

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was feeling the lyrics, you got a unique style, and voice, but beat wasnt a good choice
fo ya, hook as ok, could do better, other than that ish i was feeling this track
just think you need to polish it up a bit.....

i got a battle open thats my only track right now.....jea so peep that lmao

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