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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Let's do this yo!!!!!!!!!!!! Good Luck!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 03-20-05 at 11:57 AM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

KiNg SoLo has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-20-05 11:27 AM.

OneStepBeyond has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-20-05 11:54 AM.

Comin into the NOK forum.. your mouth open, now your blastin calls,
really i think the most impressive thing about you, is havin balls,
but that don't win battles, cause little homie we are the tightest,
with what i write i'll make million, you can settle for artheritus,
you might catch me and the NOK crew... see us racin about, meet me..
bitch you garbage, i ain't got a problem with 'takin you out' weekly,
lets be honest... ima nice guy and i won't really enjoy this match,
better yet i'll take you out daily.. like you with your porno mags.,
and Solo.. why you think you a king, but your waitin for that crown,
your status is back from the grave? well ima be layin you back down,*
you can't see the kid bitch... so better give up on you spottin me,
bitch your a king? hahahaha, thats too bad we live in a democracy...**
you say some sick shit, highly doubt it.. but then its a rare ryhme,
and even if you were a king... this is how you spend your sparetime?


*it says From: Da U.K. ***** Status: Back from the grave!!
**kings rule in monarchy's and america is a democracy... well its a representive republic but everyone says its a democracy

that was just some quick shit

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uppin on this hott battle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 1

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checkin polls.....................................

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checkin polls ^^^^^^^^^nice verse^^^^^^^^^

wheres the votes at?..............................

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tru that man
got all the ppl checkin the battle but no one is votin

i understand mista authentiq cuz we in the same crew

but everyone else, y'all need to vote on this hot shit
favour will be returned by myself and OneStep

peep this shit mayne!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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checkin the polls...close one, but on tha real. i feel KS is too weak to have that record.

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

This was a close one to me, but I had to give it to 1step, because I feel he came a lil bit harder, and more prepared in this one. 1step had the harder punches to me, and better wordplay. He played off the personals well, and his personals didnt even need links, thats what I liked about his verse. Only thing is, I felt that your verse didnt flow well, but other than that, I felt you came with more consistency in this one.
KS-yo verse was ight to me, but I wasnt feelin it from start to finish like I was wit 1step. You had better structure, but I dont think you came harder with punches. I think you lacked good wordplay and vocab in this one, but ur whole verse wasnt bad to me. Yo verse flowed better because of your structure. I think you should work on your personals. Links are old, if you cant make a good diss personal w/out links, it wasnt meant to be put in yo verse. I dont even think anyone clicks on them links anymore, but NO HATE, good drop, I just dont think you took this one.
Overall-A close battle in my book, but 1step got it wit good punches, and better wordplay.

v/onestepbeyond

^^^ ok i'm not hatin but wat the fuck????

1step uses basic wordplay and his punches were standard, my punches were far more complex, and my personals were to with like one in near enough every line. aight, if u don't like links fine, but still my personals were far more complex in my book.

it just goes to show how far this site has fallen from when it was RapBattles ReLaunched. the votin don't happen and and majority of those that do vote don't know what the fuck they tlkin about!!!!

anyway uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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chill man... uppin................................

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