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Old 07-31-02, 10:47 PM   #1
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Dejuretharaw Vs Slowhands

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10 lines/max each
lets make it real - 20 minutes each
 
Old 07-31-02, 10:48 PM   #2
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checked n ready to check
 
Old 07-31-02, 10:50 PM   #3
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chekin in..i'll post after u aiight
 
Old 07-31-02, 10:51 PM   #4
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due in 20 minutes - both of us retard
 
Old 07-31-02, 11:17 PM   #5
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im about to post - hope youre done.....20 minutes is almost done
 
Old 07-31-02, 11:22 PM   #6
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Round 1:

Logik??who told you battlen me was logical//you couldn’t spit good punches…if your saliva was made of juices that were tropical //(2)

Obsticle??your nothin for me to deal-wit//your flow is like a Sulibit pu**y, Cuz no body in RB is gonna feel-it//(4)

Realness??Lodgik….you need to re-deem// You winnin…wont happen again,like R.Kelly gettin wet-dreams…..standin by Pre-teens//(6)

Ryme-Scheme??you need one…..Your just Babble//I’ve seen more word play, with two retarded Special Ed kids playin scrabble//(8)

Battle?? its your Top-Bad-Habit//Lodik to Rap, is like Shaq to Acting…your Not-Good-At-It//(10)



That’s 10…took me 5 minutes/I got tired of waitin lodgik…Oh yea your girls still ugly..Herb
 
Old 07-31-02, 11:23 PM   #7
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you got 5 miutes left to post or u DQ'ed
 
Old 07-31-02, 11:25 PM   #8
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got you "seated trying to calculate an amount", this is not 'mathematics'...i got you "down for the count"...

youre not even good at 'skipping' and thats rare-son, thats why youre "losing at hopscotch" and ending up at "square one"
ima spare-none not giving a god damn, your 'off topic' herb, having "windows XP" doesnt make you "with the program"
losing rank, youre 'punches couldnt be on the money' 'spray painted on a bank', youre entire styles a prank
thats why like "non-existant painters" youre "drawing a blank", Im 'organizing this battle herb' 'get put in your place'
at Slow's pace, your verse is like your face...only a mother could love-it, cuz this battle is "one-sided" like Micheal Jackson's "gloves-get", Dejure need help and a fucking mentor, let me talk to Shadow and bring back the wackness center
stupid gets defined when youre "changing fonts" trying to get a 'fine' line, continue to whine, cuz im pissing off librarian "breaking your SPINE"

youre getting "shut-down" like a unfilled parking meter, give up...you dont belong here like retarded squirrels in an empty bird feeder...

herb'n homo
 
Old 07-31-02, 11:30 PM   #9
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uppin for votes
 
Old 07-31-02, 11:43 PM   #10
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Logik??who told you battlen me was logical//you couldn’t spit good punches…if your saliva was made of juices that were tropical //(2)
son, the idea of this opener was good...yet u worded it really badly...

Obsticle??your nothin for me to deal-wit//your flow is like a Sulibit pu**y, Cuz no body in RB is gonna feel-it//(4)
[b]ehh it was aight


Realness??Lodgik….you need to re-deem// You winnin…wont happen again,like R.Kelly gettin wet-dreams…..standin by Pre-teens//(6)
so basically, u sayin that Logik is gonna win this...cuz Rkelly DOES get wet dreams thinkin bout pre-teens

Ryme-Scheme??you need one…..Your just Babble//I’ve seen more word play, with two retarded Special Ed kids playin scrabble//(8)
that was nice....best line of your verse

Battle?? its your Top-Bad-Habit//Lodik to Rap, is like Shaq to Acting…your Not-Good-At-It//(10)
very bad closer[b/]


Overall...5 outta 10..i seen better from you

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got you "seated trying to calculate an amount", this is not 'mathematics'...i got you "down for the count"...
[b] that line ALONE beat dejures verse

youre not even good at 'skipping' and thats rare-son, thats why youre "losing at hopscotch" and ending up at "square one"
LOL word word
ima spare-none not giving a god damn, your 'off topic' herb, having "windows XP" doesnt make you "with the program"
do i really gotta keep bolding shit like this
losing rank, youre 'punches couldnt be on the money' 'spray painted on a bank', youre entire styles a prank
thats why like "non-existant painters" youre "drawing a blank", Im 'organizing this battle herb' 'get put in your place'
at Slow's pace, your verse is like your face...only a mother could love-it, cuz this battle is "one-sided" like Micheal Jackson's "gloves-get", Dejure need help and a fucking mentor, let me talk to Shadow and bring back the wackness center
stupid gets defined when youre "changing fonts" trying to get a 'fine' line, continue to whine, cuz im pissing off librarian "breaking your SPINE"

youre getting "shut-down" like a unfilled parking meter, give up...you dont belong here like retarded squirrels in an empty bird feeder...
u never cease to amaze me...somtimes


overall....8.5 outta 10....

Vote-Logik with ease


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Old 08-01-02, 05:43 AM   #11
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1-0 slow
 
Old 08-01-02, 07:19 AM   #12
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this battle was aight...but my vote goes to logik..cause his punchlines were hott...dejure verse was pretty drawn out..and for all the words he used..it pretty much brought nuthin...big up to ya'll though..one

vote=logik
 
Old 08-01-02, 01:53 PM   #13
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logik took this in my book, better everything in my opinion.



vote=logik
 
Old 08-01-02, 03:16 PM   #14
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well holy shit
case closed battles over
3-0KO
to think i had a little writers block going on - i cant believe i used that bank line
n e ways learn who youre talking shit to
no respect homo
 
Old 08-01-02, 03:26 PM   #15
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u got this one.....but yo girl still ugly..lol
 
 


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