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beat: Warrior Part2 - Lloyd Banks

"Good Die Young"

like everybody else, I wanna settle the score
but I wanna know what’s happening behind closed doors
there’s a war going on and we don’t know what it’s for
day in, day out, a younger and younger corpse

better choose to keep the real and not the pretend
gotta choose ya side, who you really wanna defend?
you deep up in the streets, always got beef to no end
and the danger you live in; it’s more than just a trend
wear the wrong color and they know that you a foreigner
no honor getting shot for standing on the wrong corner
hand on the glock, tick tock like a clock
sell them rocks like a silent auction, “right off the block”
stuck in the life you lead ‘cause you be loving the rush
love the thought of coming close, barely escaping death’s clutch
the gun got aim, but the bullet ain’t got eyes
BANG!!…another mother holding her bloody child
baptizing her eyes through the many tears that she cries
he was a good, but died young, met his early demise
had his head in his book, wasn’t tryina be hard
but they dealing, killing, stealing right across the yard

like everybody else, I wanna settle the score
but I wanna know what’s happening behind closed doors
there’s a war going on and we don’t know what it’s for
day in, day out, a younger and younger corpse

all he wanted was an education, this wasn’t explained
now it’s the worst decision that he felt he’s ever made
seeing pictures of a home that he NEVER thought he’d miss
every word from his mouth, another thought reminisced
he signed the dotted line, now he on the front lines
another comrade dies, but the pain is disguised
4 feet tall, at his head pointing steal
he don’t wanna shoot a kid, but it’s kill or GET killed
getting yelled at by this rebel to “put your weapon down
get your face to the ground”, now his heart starts to pound
so he hit the deck, but see him running for the door
with sweaty palms, he pushed himself up off the floor
heard the bullets hitting bricks while he’s filling up the clip
and he’s gotta move quick, ‘cause he don’t wanna get hit
got shot where he stands, weapon still up in his hand
another good died young, left to fill a body bag

like everybody else, I wanna settle the score
but I wanna know what’s happening behind closed doors
there’s a war going on and we don’t know what it’s for
day in, day out, a younger and younger corpse


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Timid Obl

Wus up mami

U doing yo shit am proud,...........we still need to drop collab shawty am feelin this but the beat for the topic is lil hardcore

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lol found a link that worked to this in the establishment forum...

*listenin*

beat - maybe abit raw for this topic but nah actually its fittin pretty well

hook - very dope and very effective wordin

verses - dope dawg, lyrics are very gud, flow is almost flawless, you sound young how old are you? mic presense cud be beta but emotion is definetely there, gud shit

verdict - gud concept here, dope lyrics and emotion, 8.5/10

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yo good drop fam like tha flow,tha lyrics were great....and i felt you fo real chea fam overall im givin ya8/10 voice is kidesh but still dope drop fam keep it up

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It's Murdah now, not murder.

flow is awsome,dont really like this beat,never did,nice lyrics overall,flow is dope,quality is iight not bad at all...nice track

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return fav plz...........................................

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I just love your style and flow, definitely best female in this shit.

The hook was straight fire, it's all truth, it keeps going in your mind and I am really feeling how you worded it. Verses were really good, it's straight spitting from the core: the bold and raw truth you're speaking right there. Emotion is very strong and your delivery is impeccable. You had your flow on lock, beat was good...

Keep on dropping hot girl!

DQ

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