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*listenin*

calam - nice lyrics here, flow is dope, lyrics are very nice even, gud emotion on this one calam feeling it, damn dope beat

dv - again gud emotion, and lyrics some clever concepts, not quite as gud as calam lyrically on this one, flow real nice on point throughout, dope

beat - sick really feeling this

hook - effective kanye feel to this one

verdict - dope track, you two continue to impress, 8.5-9/10 (almost perfect)

pz

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Calam.....ya vocals was a tad low, sounds like u ain't master width...nice reverb on'em tho.....flow was good somewhat basic but it worked with this beat.....delivery was nice....it was laid-back an subtle but the emotion you were trying to convey came thru nicely......lyrics was worded nice but your delivery made your verse.......really all you needed was a more distinct flow change-up it was somewhat repetitive...or maybe you could of changed your tempo here an there...other than ya voclas be a lil low an ya flow being to consistent...good drop

Deadly.......yours a lil perplexing cuz uy were flowing on snare but it didn't seem to good wit this beat...I usually like ya delivery where u punch in certain words like when u say "I fucked up".....but it seemed outta place on this beat....the beat was too laidback for all that....I woulda liked to here u flow strait thru this one without the punchin words....an ya delivery was off too....it was good but not for this beat ya lyrics didn't match ya delivery..ya verse seemed to have a "I'm sorry" theme an u was spitting almost as if ya angry.....u shoulda softened that a bit.....u had cnage ups in ya flow tho so thta was nice....an ya usual pops was significantly down....jus u spit somewhat outta place.....but decent drop

Overall:.....Y'all choose a nice beat for this track....I liked the sample on the hook but maybe one of y'all should said something btw thoe big gaps btw the "love u" sample on the hook.....other than that this track was alrite jus needs some touching up.....7/10......1

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I dont really like the beat it sounds like it was made on a casio keyboard... Calams vocals are too low... his flow is how it always is, very good-- lyrics are strong- just up his vocal volume... vocal sample is cool... Deadly your shit is cool too, but I think it might be a little low volume wise too, just some words harder to decipher than others, more easier to understand for the most part than calam unless I blast it... this was a good track... phone calls... but where's the convo?--- hehe, i know its unfinished, its a good start story and flow wise, just need to fix some production problems... 1

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This was somethin new for me....since its slow..beat.........but i apreciate ya'll feed fam now i got places i can focus to improve

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