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04-01-05, 02:57 AM
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altruism
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Altruism Can i possibly be anymore obvious for people to notice me?
i'm over here, can't you see? no, you can't, because i'm just an illusion to you. No matter how hard everyone tries they'll never be able to fully understand how much they'll never understand. Because they dont want to, they cant, they wont, its too hard, it takes too much effort, its just a joke. common please just open your mind, and close your eyes. Dont be scared i dont want to hurt you, i just want to comfort you. Just let me help you on your journey... But no, noone will take a chance. It'll be 500 life times before you'll truely be aware of what matters and whats deceit. Well thats alright cause i'll still be waiting for you. When you get there... i'm the one thats been obvious the whole time, the one who hasn't wronged you ever,the one you can trust, and the one who would give you it all if you asked. I'm honesty, truthfulness, kindness, thoughtfulness, generousity, warmth, unselfishness..... yet in this world all i am is weakness. Dope piece of conveyed thoughtfulness, Featured for a week~Fluid
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04-03-05, 01:13 PM
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IP:
if any of this hits a note to any of you, leave some input on your thoughts........
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04-05-05, 02:27 AM
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i thought this was clever,well written, and i sometimes feel this way myself about others, it's a shame when people cant open up to different ideas or ways of life that others can share from, but foreal, good piece,1
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04-05-05, 03:58 PM
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X_x
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Thanks alot for the input mate, I really appreciate the feed/empathy in your input.... I like when people read something and take something a way from it, instead of just looking at the shell.
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04-05-05, 06:10 PM
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i liked it, good writing, i see you write with a sense of passion, and easily relate your life (or life experiences) to your writtens, and that is a great gift to have. my only problem upon reading this piece...was your current avatar. it was very distracting, but keep up. well done
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04-19-05, 01:52 PM
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the medicine man
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your are deep
i woulda never known had it not been for that bitch Typical viewing ya shit ha! word up Typ? |
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04-19-05, 01:52 PM
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very touching, it kind of hurt...
u feel me?.....
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04-19-05, 01:54 PM
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Apollyon
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wat up shh!.............................................. ....
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04-19-05, 05:22 PM
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IP:
?????????????????????????????????????????????????? yes?
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