Just.......something....
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The unforgiving Tags,
makes people sad,
like the look of a broken flag,
and hits like bronken bats,
to unsuspecting lads,
who dont know what they have,
when they try to ask,
why such an easy task,
where everything is possesed,
then lost with no regrets,
in the overground bets,
though he was at his best,
paid the cost then lost the test,
in the back of his mind it haunts,
he didnt learn from what he was tought,
was on the wrong side of the boat and got caught,
but he will never regret fore this man is humble,
watched his whole life crumble,
but never stumbled.
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Life alwase has its consequences,
but when it dont relent,
ya gotta learn to build a tent,
and adapt and laugh,
speak to unspoken wishes.
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he was brought up to contomplate,
should he go or wait,
stay or suffer for longer,
die or keep in the water,
or stay alive and watch the slaughter,
these choises he has to make,
these things he has to take,
knowing he will make a mistake,
the Meek shall inherit the earth,
these thoughts since birth,
why this world of dirt,
such distruction and pain,
will they ever learn to refrain,
from teaching the unlearnable,
these things to me are concernable,
a complex mind like Liquid Sun unburnable,
life as a whole is a tutorial,
untill our buryial,
so these are my thoughts the Unforgiving Tags,
the whirlwind scripture kept in my mind bags.
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Life alwase has its consequences,
but when it dont relent,
ya gotta learn to build a tent,
and adapt and laugh,
speak to unspoken wishes.
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i tryed to put some REALLY complex metaphores in there so if you see something you dont understand read it over again.........and most are Double Untundra Metaphores so just think about it.........thanks for reading.........Peayces

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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

ima take that no feedback thing as.... i left yall speechless......Peayces

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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

lol^

it was aight ... needs better imagery .. and a better direction iono just was lacking something .. stay up tho

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