I left feed on VP's "Babylon" and Tha Q's "Intelligence" and as i always say, i dont stretch lines. thats the way it sounds on audio. but youll here thin in audio by tomorrow.

Nitrogen, Forgotten Flow, Yung Duke

I sorta feel like, im cleaning out my closet like slim
but the only difference is, im throwin more skeletons in
bringin to end, these companionships wit fake friends
visiting mothers, sayin sorry makin amends
but its like, no body wants to see me suceed
in this life, I call em ambitions, they call it a dream
fantisies, but minds a hard safe to crack
got protection by the NOK, i feel safe wit that
cause growin up where im at, you need soeone to have ya back
i feel lost, cause the person that did that, just passed
So im the only one here for myself
frontin in front of my own eyes, cant be real to myself
Cant deal wit myself, im hurtin myself, i'm killin myself
talkin bout whats wrong and right when im guilty myself
aint feelin myself to be honest, yo im fearin myself
talkin bout how rap changed and dont bother hearin myself...

"The significant problems we face cannot be solved at the same level of thinking we were at when we created them." - Albert Einstein
*Mirror Crashes*

Its like im lookin through a 2 way mirror... I see me as you see me, i also see me as i see me
Its like im lookin through a 2 way mirror... I could care less how you see me, dont give a damn if u aprove me
Its like im lookin through a 2 way mirror... Im gone fight till the war let out, not the one for Bush, the one for me
Its like im lookin through a 2 way mirror... I see me as you see me, i also see me as i see me

Its like im lookin through a 2 way mirror, reflections of the devine
At the same time, seein the other sides of my rhymes
my race is the victims of so many hate crimes
but lookin throught their eyes, yo this is a great time
you see the KKK can heave their little marches
burn they crosses wit torches, as long as they stayin off us
We're doomed to purgatory theses years that bush is in office
See Kerry won the election even though you think he lost
you see the point to bush's plan, i've yet to find
Cause for some reason as a child feel like i was left behind
brawn over brains, body over mind, mind over body
brains over brawn, put to use what god got me... and I
know wit these skills aint nobody stoppin it,
livin everyday like its the dawn of the apocolypse
everything is now lookin perfect cause its right
its like im makin real music for the first time in my life///

"The difference between fiction and reality? Fiction has to make sense." - Tom Clancy
*Mirror Crashes*

Its like im lookin through a 2 way mirror... I see me as you see me, i also see me as i see me
Its like im lookin through a 2 way mirror... I could care less how you see me, dont give a damn if u aprove me
Its like im lookin through a 2 way mirror... Im gone fight till the war let out, not the one for Bush, the one for me
Its like im lookin through a 2 way mirror... I see me as you see me, i also see me as i see me

spitiin on heavenly mics, wit a new perception of life
heart tainted by the temptness of the devils invite
and i may just be a pawn in this lyrical life
but ive been shown the light of indubitable delight
and i might, not be right, but i'll stick around for the fight
cause this lookin glass has shown me mortality and strife
so inturn, i show dedication to completing my task
of holding the realization, of life in my grasp
im showin these fags, my music, is more than just rap
so when i spit about violence, realize its more than just that
Yung Duke is dead, now they got me mournin my past
this may be the best i ever wrote, but its far from my last
breath gone when i spit, my heart may collapse
but i'll sacrafice my life, to put substance to rap
and people hate me for it? yo im lovin these cats
Im bein real so because of that i suck on my tracks?

"Music is the reflection of ones life, if u dont produce the truth in your music, what does that say about you?" - Fogotten Flow

(Talking)
Its like im looking through a two way mirror.

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dope shit!!!!

all the shit was nice. flow and structure were on point. i was feelin this drop fasho and i can tell you put a lot of effort into it. i like the hook....that lookin thru a 2-way mirror and shit, that was nice. the vocab was tight, u ain't dropped some shitty vocab like some of these herbz do with their basic crap.

overall a top open mic here. keep doin ure thang!!! 9/10

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This is one dope Open Mic. The part by Forgotton Flow is my favourite part...the multies were very dope there. The whole piece had a good flow, it was nicely wrote and it kept me reading. A good vocabulary usage in this, and it looks like you spent time to make this look good. The hook was pretty dope too. I would give this Open Mic an 8.5/10 or more.

yea thanks for the feed uppin

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bumpin this up.

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shit where the hell u been nigga?

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Shit was fire straight fire vocab was hitting flow was hitting structure was great this was a hot piece Flow Tony Green aint really seen no text from you one of my first ones reading of yours and it was hot 9/10 good job!
PM me if you wanna collab

btw rtf link in sig!

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Tony Green's Soundclick

aight tony ima get at ya shit today real soon. gotta straighten some shit out. but do any of the others have om's they want feed on?

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