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Check in by: 04-08-05 at 08:12 AM

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Murdz has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-05-05 08:13 AM.

da Illest!! has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-05-05 08:15 AM.

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Lyricaly gifted?? dude ya obviously not in ya right brain
He looks up to his sig...yea coz his skills r little like wayne.
I wont stop striking till his nose is broke coz this foes a joke...his like blessed ciggarets coz when i saw his wackness..holy smoke!!
Seeing you quite rapping is wot ima do...its my vision
coz its like ya fucking open mic to me..its "my mission"
dawg you could'nt be hard-core if u was hit by ice freezed apples..
i mean this kids so wack he has to list his battles??...
Dude you dont spit fire so stop claiming ya raps are da hottest
n da only reason u list ya battles is to track ya losses...
Ya rhyme improperly so u obviously to need to learn properly
better off you could quit battlin n make n open mic how you lost to me..........

Voted For: Murdz

i dunno...this was kinda depressing to read, because there was nothing funny, or anything, both had a few lines that were decent

illest, not bad, i thought the reason you didnt get my vote, because you just weren't consistent with dissin', like you have a potentially hot line, but then you would but some dumbass filler in that just did crap for ya, like, it looks like you can really get the hang of battling, but you gotta keep a good flow of disses and try to come up with some witty, creative stuff
"Dude you dont spit fire so stop claiming ya raps are da hottest
n da only reason u list ya battles is to track ya losses..."
^ like, if you keep your whole verse like this, like, this was a good line man, best in the battle, but you didn't stay consistent all the way through
"Seeing you quite rapping is wot ima do...its my vision
coz its like ya fucking open mic to me..its "my mission" "
^ example of a terrible line, good playin of his open mic, but its not a diss, and it sucked..........well, basically thats it, alot of your lines had good potential to be decent lines, but you had either poor wordplay or crappy set ups, so i suggest work on those, then get some new creative stuff, and you should be a force, ahah, keep up man

murdz....
"judgin' by your pickin 'an' choosin I'd say you're addicted-to-losin...
...plus your "lines" are so weak Whitney Houston wouldn't use-em*..."
^ best line, this was not your best, i think you've fallen into the multi spiral man, you keep trying to rhyme everything and its taking alot away from your punches.....multies are good, but only if you can use them effectively....you kinda just put them in to get a nice flow....alot of your shit, all it did was rhyme, but i thought you kept it consistent and kept dissin him, which saved you...so my advice, YOU DONT ALWAYS NEED MULTIES TO HAVE A GOOD PUNCH....because if all you're doing is rhyming, then you're not dissing....keep up though....

v/murdz...RTF in my sig

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yo! i really dig you ish..no d/r that ain't me but like i say you put ur ish together very well.....

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who me????
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Voted For: Murdz

v/ Murdz

Murdz
Structure: 9
Multiz: 8
Punches: 8
Personals: 8
Wordplay: 10
Creativity: 8

51%

da Illest
Structure: 5
Multiz: 5
Punches: 8
Personals: 7
Wordplay: 6
Creativity: 8

39%


illest had some nice lines...but structure fucked him up...return da favor

Voted For: Murdz

ok neither had good punches are personals for that matter at all but flow and structure goes to murdz for having a better flowing verse and better vocab as well so based on that he outrclassed his oppenant.neither had good punches as i said but murdz also had slightly less wack punches and personals then da illest so in all catagorys he topped da illest and gets my vote.
rtf on link in sig both of you

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vvv AND A NEW LEVEL OF HERB EMERGES vvv

^^in other words your scared running from a battle on a site made for battling and your mod so you dont have to battle you just duck and pop shit?
herb

Voted For: Murdz

...illest wants me to clap-first, I'll be glad to rap-first...
...now watch me snap ya words in half an' rearrange 'em backwards...
uh ok line not realy a punch
...shiiiit, if Usher's "Got it Bad" then you've gotten-it-worse...
...cuz the only time you "clap back" is when you're applaudin-my-verse...
Dopeness nice word play
...when these verbs are spit-fast they give you whiplash like when you stop-in-reverse...
...I know this probably-hurts but I'ma keep droppin-this-curse...
Not bad
...your shit talk I don't buy-it, don't respond just keep your ass-quiet...
...cuz your rhymes're about as effective as Oprah's last-diet...
Nice
...when I unleash the vocabulary, guns won't be necessary...
...cuz my caliber as a speaker is equal to blastin' a heater...
strange rhyme scheme
...judgin' by your pickin 'an' choosin I'd say you're addicted-to-losin...
...plus your "lines" are so weak Whitney Houston wouldn't use-em*...
lol
...I'm jokin, your rhymes are amusin illest, you make some good music-too...
...only when I'm lookin for sumthin to be snoozin-to...
nice
...how you gonna react when I freeze you up like a statue...
...make use of my vocal uzi an lyrically cap you...
Ok

Overall: dope verse some nice wordplay and a few hard hitting punches. Some lines seemed to be fillers but oh well.




Lyricaly gifted?? dude ya obviously not in ya right brain
He looks up to his sig...yea coz his skills r little like wayne.
Na
I wont stop striking till his nose is broke coz this foes a joke...his like blessed ciggarets coz when i saw his wackness..holy smoke!!
Ok multis on that
Seeing you quite rapping is wot ima do...its my vision
coz its like ya fucking open mic to me..its "my mission"
Ok personal
dawg you could'nt be hard-core if u was hit by ice freezed apples..
i mean this kids so wack he has to list his battles??...
No he doesnt
Dude you dont spit fire so stop claiming ya raps are da hottest
n da only reason u list ya battles is to track ya losses...
Where does he list his battles??
Ya rhyme improperly so u obviously to need to learn properly
better off you could quit battlin n make n open mic how you lost to me..........
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Da illest- Not too bad I liked your closer. Punches weren't as witty as murdz' but close.

My vote goes to murz better punches wordplay and metas illest's personals were ok tho i geuss. ~werd~

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