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Old 04-10-05, 03:34 PM   #1
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Old 04-10-05, 04:25 PM   #2
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im definitely not feelin the hook at all.....

beat...im not feelin it....

your flow...is decent....nothin amazing

delivery....is ok..nothin special...

lyrical content....is shitty...

overall...i really wasnt feelin this track at all...your on that gangsta bang bang ima shoot you up shit...which i dont like....for a mainstream track...your gonna have to come up with something better than this...with a more catchy hook...and a wore witty flow that people can bounce to...nobody is gonna bounce to this...and thats apparently what you are going for...but as far as this track goes...its not workin for you...keep elevating
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Old 04-10-05, 04:51 PM   #3
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beat is dope............

lyrically..on that gangsta tip, thus not amazin, altho if this is supposed 2 b a banga, lyrics aint that much of a issue

ur hook needs work, needs mo like layers to it..its not really ctachy and it needs dat to get people up n boppin n dancin yo..

overall not bad, not great, decent track
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Old 04-10-05, 04:56 PM   #4
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WAT THE FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!

YOUNG HOOTIE IZ ON RV?????????????????

ALL U HATERS STOP TALKIN

I JUS COPED DIS MIXTAPE LAST WEEK

BANGER

YALL NIGGAZ TALKIN BOUT ELAVATE

HE GOT A DEAL, HE DID SONGS WIT SNOOP, DAMN

DIS IZ TIGHT AZ HELL
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Old 04-10-05, 05:17 PM   #5
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aiight nice beat chorus is a bit repetitive for my personal taste delivery is good production is good mixing is good nice solid lyrics and punches and word play melody of the beat is a bit repetitive as well..overall pretty good song
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Old 04-10-05, 10:48 PM   #6
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