yo...... fuck all of you and fuck this whole entire open mic forum
theres no flow no beat half the time i do this shit outta boredom
only heard locally its bout time i start doin shit on the rv vocally
wether i'm just doing all this shit rappin seriously or just jokingly
if i just gave up on r.v. no one'll care all because i ain't admired
and i almost got too do my first audio but the software expired
but fuck it with open mics it aint required and my fingers R tired
i wont shoot you im no gangsta & i wont punch u i aint a fighter
but if u ever by chance beef with me ill merk you cuz im a writer
sometimes i'll diss u cuz im pissed or just act crazy cuz im hyper
& some of u members will never simply know quite what it is like
to get respect on an open mic doesnt matter if u black or white
its easy 2 fight conditions so tight by just learning how to write
i just grab a pen & write after bein just released from the police
& i come home and find my best friends murdered and deceased
wether it's my brother, sister, mother, father, homie or my niese
if i wasn't fuckin' on my knees when the police told me to freeze
commiting felonies while im freestyling and humming out melodies
and it ain't hard ta just see that some of u hate cuz of jealousy
but it dont mean nuthin else ta me but too drink that hennessey


x-cell:
I well not fold to the pressure
If i do then i wouldnt be me
I well not let it beat me
it well never defeat me


and everyday i just fuckin deal with faggot after faggot
and if you beef with me i'ma takke your leg and break it
i just can't take it all these rv members that just fake it
sayin that they live life as a criminal just cuz u take shit
and trust me i won't ever fuckin' fold under the pressure
but get ready 2 get killed if u give me the wrong gesture
and it feels like im living life in hell so im here with x-cell
and he knows what the fuck its like too just be exspelled
& we just gettin this shit off of our chest cuz we the best
& i cant take whatevers next nomore time too act messed
and how everytime ur g/f cheating will result to a beating
while having a crew meeting she's out with a human being
& she starts fleeing once everybody starts fuckin agreeing
and she uses some dumb excuse that she's still your lover
and that she was only hanging around with her big brother
and that she doesn't even want too be with no one other


x-cell:
I well not fold to the pressure
If i do then i wouldnt be me
I well not let it beat me
it well never defeat me

i didnt read his verses b4 this i just did the hook and he wrote his shit

i really liked it nice vocab...lines were a lil strecthed...the flow was really good
structre was good also...stayed on topic thourgh the whole thing...nice aggersion and shit

7.5/10

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Clcik Hear To Hear My Music

uppin ya'll..........

uppin yo.......

come on yall give my homie some feed on this piece

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Clcik Hear To Hear My Music

^^^^^^^^^^what did i tell u yo hood dawg good shit homie nice drop
keep it up verse was questionable but other than that it was ight

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It's Murdah now, not murder.

yo im uppin on this shit

yo stop ignorin and start typing

does look like im muthafuckin jokin leave some muthafuckin feed!!!!!!!!!!!

This was a decent drop,
could use alot of work...
Use more feeling when you done.. maybe some emotions
Both of your structure's were good , nice job
You can use alittle owrk on wordplay , and vocab..
elevate stay active , and hope to see another drop from you

Ps: Drop a link or this will be closed

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