(K!ng Y@Yo)
M.O.B. Mafia could neva keep up wit tha veterans,
Battling crews they know they will neva be betta than
^^didnt flow well...stop with the they /they shit
Add up ur hole crew yall aint even got half our talent,
Spittin nothin like u chokein and ur hole crew is silent
^^eh
Yall is quick to talk shit,but really yall bitch and cant spit,
Yall step up and get ripped, cuzz all my punches hit
^^what punches?...and again with the ya'll/ya'll shit
Making a newbie crew jus to get yallz name reconized,
My rhymes so syck leave yall shook and hypnotized
^^didnt make sense."how do sick ryhmes hypnotize"??
Be ready to get ripped when we role threw, yall know da crew
Emerica's Finest coming wit linez blazin to take out all of u
^^bottom line was stretched..flow fell off
But wait they aint da only herb crew takin shots at us
Lil bitches like Bonecollector and da hole Legendary Status
^^eh,...stating facts...no point
We should be callin yall out yall know yall will neva win,
Dis battle might be close but so is ur hole crews end
^^1st line was ass...2nd was decent..
Dis bitch named Slob.K claimin dat he is a crip walka,
When yall really know he sucks he jus a mad shit talka
^^wheres the wit?
Neva gonna be no Legends in ur crew so switch ur name,
Yall some Ametures so get da fuck back dis is a Pros game
^^weak
Look at ur roster is it right??? Nah we got LyricalFlowz,
Yall all ova his dick, im let yall dream yall some desperate hoez
^^you shouldnt be allowed to use "ya'll" ever again..!



(Tony Green)
M.O.B can rest in peace we assasinate you lyrically.
Rhymes effect ears so you physically aint hearing me.
^^decent
I blow away Ma$termind so now he can't use his head.
Crew is full of noobs, said it in they own try-out thread.
^^lol,....simple
Spell Kid backwards add a C before the K.
You got 523 I'll slice your leaders 2nd face.
^^setup was decent, 2nd line fucked the bar
Emerica's finest aint never tryin to be a bad host.
187 to Armada and chase down the friendly ghost.(Ca$per)
^^decent, simple though
Your game is over so be ready to flip.
Clique is bound to slip, like shoes with no grip.
^^weak, couldve been more complex,
And don't be mad cause this is just business.
But I'm firing niggaz like they an apprentice.
^^played...very very played
Talking shit to my clique you can get your face hit.
At first yall was on the 1st floor now yall in the basement.
^^nah
I aint the mafia but I can get your mans hit.
Cause I'm thru with these bitches and I'm losing the Tranz$cripts. (What)
^^couldve been way better, wasnt even really a punch
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1st verse:shorten ya lines, dont repeat yourself so damn much
make direct punches, not ones that encompass the entire crew
all of your bars were fillers...nothin there was punches...
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2nd verse:expand on ya concepts, stay away from played comparisons
you had some decent setups and approaches but didnt capitalize on them.
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just to clear things up, you both had
no punches in your intire verseno hate

Originally Posted by K!ng-Y@Yo ^^^Dawg quit talkin cuzz i could careless wtf ur sayin put it in a verse or something dis here is a Rappin site not a shit talkin site.....One

Originally Posted by CA$per ^^^^^^^^^^ahahahaha yayo u fucking little bitch its ight im coming back at you i just got home bitch did it take yall tha whole week i was gone to write that ahaha ill be clappin soon bitches dont worrie and yayo shut up till i drop it you fucking romper room reject

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Originally Posted by Invektive ehh Tony has somewhat elevated a lil bit...not a whole lot...but your gettin there....u still suck tough...work on more witty punches...some of your bars had potential...but you just werent witty enough to make the hit to their full potential....and then some of them had no potential at all

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