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Old 04-11-05, 07:04 PM   #1
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Old 04-11-05, 07:08 PM   #2
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peepin. beat is krunk. never heard u freestyle b4. lets see ... nyce style on this one. slow flow. sometimes its boring but wen u do throw in a good lyric or 2 it keeps me payin attention. alot of basic lines tho. y r u reppin yo in this? i know ur from detroit. i dunno. duznt seem like a freestyle more like a freeverse but yea it was nyce all in all
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Old 04-11-05, 07:10 PM   #3
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the Y O thing was wordplay...
lol
get used to it
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Old 04-11-05, 09:05 PM   #4
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flow's cool.. not really feelin the voice.. sounds kinda forced. not feelin the internet lines, lol.. other than that, it's decent.. could be better. keep it movin
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Old 04-11-05, 09:07 PM   #5
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i think u listened to someone else's track guy....
no internet lines here...
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Old 04-11-05, 09:11 PM   #6
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u rapped on the bone crusher beat right? if so, that's what i was listening to.. mentioned somethin about postin pics on steak and cheese or somethin.. i dunno.. just wasn't feelin it.
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Old 04-11-05, 09:21 PM   #7
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pretty nice ish man...........word up nigglet
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Old 04-11-05, 09:24 PM   #8
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jea jea


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Old 04-13-05, 03:56 PM   #9
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You knew I was gone hit ya shit up son.....20 G's freestyling?....lol....but anyways....u been listening to alot of JR writer I see...cuz u flowed like he do...short lines wit echoed rhyming words....lyrically it wasn't spectacular but u don't freestyle alot so I wouldn't expect to be a monster lyrically...u had a few cool lines....flowed nice(due to ya mixing)....with out the echoes an libs...this would have been blan as fuck but u did a nice job sproosing it up...delivery was fair....u shoulda stressed some words or had some influctions u didn't really change up ya tone or tempo in this...so it got kinda repetitive but keep freeing son....stay up.....1

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