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Old 04-11-05, 08:52 PM   #1
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Fucka Ghost Writers, J.T.R Claps Back... Rofl ya why not?

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Bored, Drunk... a quick key, why not? lol

Alright look:

L.I's back, holy shit, everybody pull out your fucking saddle
Nah wait, he's fallen off
........................... Just look at his loss in the hotshh! battle!
Ah shit, wait, you got cheated out of that win, i'll admit, hell
The fallen off line was a joke.... WAIT! Don't get any ideas S.P.L
Now forget T.E. wanna battle me? You get merked the same
I'll start you off with an L... Like the begining of your name
You hesitated the come back to RV, it's ok you took your time
It's just that I expected a bigger return
.................................... Then merking an herb in Frontlines
Now come on kid, I thought you were better then this, right?
Buety is in the eye of the beholder, and you got flow in your sight
N' his dick in your hand, front?, you get sonned and parented
Don't blame me, ask your dad, your Loss was Inherited
Your an herbish character, but this aint weed comics, and it's a shame
that...
......The only time L.I would blow up........ is if SPuL was in that plane
And Your sig kid, Dawg I gotta tell you something
Even wireless phones have connections dumbshit!
And DeadlyVision, your text is a deadlyvision, don't front stupid whore
Called t.e. out, it's why you don't run Authentick Intelligence anymore
The reason we don't battle you... I don't wanna put ya'll in bad health
Cuz I would seriously say i'm Ghost Writerz enygma
.................................................. .... But i'd be degrading myself
flow inteligent? Ya flow makes me sick, and that's not a play off your alias
Cuz the only thing hot about you dog, is your girls nice ass and tits
N' yes it's a compliment, Janessa is hot! but believe I tapped it all
Cuz I aint just banging your girl
..................................... I'm banging your head through a wall
And it's a calamity<... that your not liked, i'll deliver multiple bashes
Fuck fighting fire with fire, i'll slice your body into pieces
.................................... So this phoenix can't rise from the ahes
I'm pissed, regardless, your on a merk list, you lose, n' you know this
Phenom, TripleN, SevenThird??? You should be in Ghost Writerz
.................................................. . Cuz your text is never noticed
So now you know it kids, t.e. is better, but you really knew it all along
So untill we ever battle, i'll put you on ignore... like S.P.L's song!

Don't Fucking Step To The Establishment
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Old 04-11-05, 09:42 PM   #2
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L.I's back, holy shit, everybody pull out your fucking saddle
Nah wait, he's fallen off
........................... Just look at his loss in the hotshh! battle!
^^lol,....decent opener.........
Ah shit, wait, you got cheated out of that win, i'll admit, hell
The fallen off line was a joke.... WAIT! Don't get any ideas S.P.L
^^filler.....but it flows well....lol
Now forget T.E. wanna battle me? You get merked the same
I'll start you off with an L... Like the begining of your name
^^eh.......
You hesitated the come back to RV, it's ok you took your time
It's just that I expected a bigger return
.................................... Then merking an herb in Frontlines
^^lmfao....
Now come on kid, I thought you were better then this, right?
Buety is in the eye of the beholder, and you got flow in your sight
^^rofl.......oh diggity damn
N' his dick in your hand, front?, you get sonned and parented
Don't blame me, ask your dad, your Loss was Inherited
^^decent.......
Your an herbish character, but this aint weed comics, and it's a shame
that...
......The only time L.I would blow up........ is if SPuL was in that plane
^^ahahahahahah.......best line ....damn thats funny(srryspul) lmfao
And Your sig kid, Dawg I gotta tell you something
Even wireless phones have connections dumbshit!
^^lol,.........he walked into that one with that sig
And DeadlyVision, your text is a deadlyvision, don't front stupid whore
Called t.e. out, it's why you don't run Authentick Intelligence anymore
^^meh,...wasnt feeling the punch though
The reason we don't battle you... I don't wanna put ya'll in bad health
Cuz I would seriously say i'm Ghost Writerz enygma
.................................................. .... But i'd be degrading myself
^^lol,.......nice flippin the concept
flow inteligent? Ya flow makes me sick, and that's not a play off your alias
Cuz the only thing hot about you dog, is your girls nice ass and tits
^^fillarama...but its koo
N' yes it's a compliment, Janessa is hot! but believe I tapped it all
Cuz I aint just banging your girl
..................................... I'm banging your head through a wall
^^lol,.large setup but weak punch
And it's a calamity<... that your not liked, i'll deliver multiple bashes
Fuck fighting fire with fire, i'll slice your body into pieces
.................................... So this phoenix can't rise from the ahes
^^this was nice....feeling the wordplay
I'm pissed, regardless, your on a merk list, you lose, n' you know this
Phenom, TripleN, SevenThird??? You should be in Ghost Writerz
.................................................. . Cuz your text is never noticed
^^^ohh hot diggity damn........i liked that closer..
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overall some funny shit, need more wordplay but i know its just an om
that spul line i thought ws dope-ness...rofl...c;loser was ill......
the rest of the verse wass pretty consistent......nicely done.."_________"..lol
it was way more personal then their verse against TE was....
for that reason alone i liked it a bit more.....straight verse....JTR
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imma drop something soon, RTF on my next OM.....
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
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Old 04-11-05, 10:01 PM   #3
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thank you thank you... it was just a drunking key anyways , upping
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Old 04-11-05, 10:06 PM   #4
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[i]Lol, this is some a nice drop..
I was really feeling it , not the best work...
You could have used maybe alittle better structure..
maybe less fillers... you had some nice punchlines..
Some funny personals...
Overall it was a funny verse.. i liked it ...
The best parts in your verse are the opener and closer , died alittle in between
try to keep pretty decent punche's

Ps: Dont forget to drop a link!
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Old 04-11-05, 10:11 PM   #5
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Old 04-11-05, 11:19 PM   #6
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Whoa.............................................h otness............................
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Old 04-11-05, 11:36 PM   #7
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haha, so far it's liked, except for enygma he hated it :'(
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Old 04-11-05, 11:40 PM   #8
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um ya I threw in one last line for the closer, last time i'll edit the verse... I had to do it while I was still drunk or it wouldn't be the same you know? lol ah fuck I got school tomorow... I hate hangover tuesdays...
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Old 04-12-05, 04:53 PM   #9
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bump bump bump
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Old 04-12-05, 05:01 PM   #10
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Yo i was feelin dis shit nice everything dawg i liked dis shit a lot....i give it a 8.5/10......good come backs 2......~1~ RTF in my OM called "FUCK E.F. (hot ass diss)"
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Old 04-12-05, 07:02 PM   #11
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And DeadlyVision, your text is a deadlyvision, don't front stupid whore
Called t.e. out, it's why you don't run Authentick Intelligence anymore


^^^Make Commen Sense TC got killed by A.I Vince was a witness..ahhahaha

the weird shit is we diss ya'll on Audio and Text ya'll come back wit 1 kid..on text hahaha
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Old 04-12-05, 08:04 PM   #12
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Originally Posted by DeadlyVision
And DeadlyVision, your text is a deadlyvision, don't front stupid whore
Called t.e. out, it's why you don't run Authentick Intelligence anymore


^^^Make Commen Sense TC got killed by A.I Vince was a witness..ahhahaha

the weird shit is we diss ya'll on Audio and Text ya'll come back wit 1 kid..on text hahaha


It does make sense man, I wasn't saying the council, I said T.E. = The Establishment, now think really hard... get it now? lol chill deadly, I never heard the audio track, and I can't listen to shit off soundclick cuz it fucks up anyways, but it wasn't T.E. who desided to send me to make a comeback, I took that desision upon myself
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Old 04-12-05, 07:51 PM   #13
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nice shit but not sayin to much cus im coo wit peps n Ghost Writerz its actually a hot crew
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Old 04-12-05, 08:14 PM   #14
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Yo jack...coo diss....some of yah shit was nice other shit was okay....u still love my sig quote tho ...but on the real, yah had sum nice shit and sum ok shit...the plane shit had me rolling....word.
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Old 04-13-05, 03:18 PM   #15
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Yo jack...coo diss....some of yah shit was nice other shit was okay....u still love my sig quote tho ...but on the real, yah had sum nice shit and sum ok shit...the plane shit had me rolling....word.


Ya your sig is sexy
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