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redzone 1 16.67%
MaRVJay1009 5 83.33%
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Old 04-15-05, 02:11 AM   #1
MaRVJay
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MaRVJay1009 vs redzone

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Old 04-15-05, 02:20 AM   #2
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REDZONE has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-15-05 02:20 AM.
 
Old 04-15-05, 02:23 AM   #3
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MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-15-05 02:23 AM.
 
Old 04-15-05, 02:24 AM   #4
MaRVJay
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da best? yea im simply,no written dis a quick key.
redzone's record is like "oprah" cuzz its "win-free".
im sick b,marvjay's da mc most of you rv cats fear.
since u '0-3' afta i merk u u'll be "04" like "last year".
........trust me i got guns fam if i pull it heads blown.
like "farve at da goal line" i'll "throw bullets in da REDZONE".
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Old 04-15-05, 02:39 AM   #5
REDZONE
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you can't be serious, mah eagles bomb on ya like brett Farve fa tha packers...
guranteed ta eat cha like cow nuts fa tha money on fear factor...
MarvJay findin out tha Hardaway, I'm shootin shots atcha life...
neva think twice pullin ya green card and get cha family swiped...
you a pussy wit a period, use ta leakin alot...
tha barrel'll leave permanent time-out in tha case ya speakin alot...
Ya amuse me, fillin mah laughter as I develope ya slaughter...
kidnap ya seed, let Mike Jackson fondle and mangle ya daughter...
 
Old 04-15-05, 02:45 AM   #6
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good verse...uupppppppppiiiiiiiiiinnnnn 4 some votes now
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Old 04-15-05, 02:53 AM   #7
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fa sho mah nigga

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you heard tha man uppin fa votes now, handle tha business homies
 
Old 04-15-05, 03:49 AM   #8
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Voted For: REDZONE

Weak ass battle for sure...

But I gotta give the win to REDZONE

-Redzone you had no multis....weak punches maybe none even decent.........But ya rhymes were more original then Marv's

-MaRV- ...weak ass punches...you tried to connect some with the 04 punches but no they were jsut not happenin

and that oprAH line is so played out...i was probably the first to use it but overall your rhymes were not happnin
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Old 04-15-05, 06:19 AM   #9
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

marvjays verse......good opening lines.....like the wordplay in the Oprah line......nice punches by referring to his record....overall pretty good verse.....came harder wit the punches.....you get the vote

Redzone......not really any good punches that stood out........could have come harder coz i didn't feel that the verse was direct enough.......
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Old 04-15-05, 12:25 PM   #10
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uupppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnn
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Old 04-15-05, 03:24 PM   #11
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uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
 
Old 04-15-05, 07:05 PM   #12
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upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn fa votes niggaz
 
Old 04-15-05, 11:00 PM   #13
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damn c'mon mah niggaz vote, I return tha favor cuz...uppin fa votes in this bitch
 
Old 04-16-05, 12:11 AM   #14
MaRVJay
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Old 04-16-05, 12:26 AM   #15
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Aii since this was a short battle ima give a short explanation

Marv
You did MARVolous lol i feel that you couldve dropped a lil bit harder to have the number of bars you had but im guessing you drop second bcuz you didnt go your hardest :P
Plain and simple you won Easily Although you dint drop your best you drop hard enough

RTF in The last battle in My sig its the shortest battle and its very easy to see who won

REDZONE

mayne your drop was good but id have to say that you didnt come hard enough Plain but not siple lOL I feel that you need to learn how to use your bars wisely Bcuz i feel that you waited to long to try and Bring it all out And thats what messed you up BIG TIME

RTF in The last battle in My sig its the shortest battle and its very easy to see who won


PLEASE thanx
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