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Old 04-25-05, 08:17 AM   #1
the'holy1
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Exclamation a 50 fan who fed man

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I spend time on lyrics / 50 spends time on gimmicks
I spit 50 rhymes minute / 50 spits nursery rhymes to midgets
I turn rhymes to money digits / 50 turn fake we witness
He soled his soul / to sell CD’s you a sell out bro
Ya you sell out concerts but your fans won’t grow
Only ten year olds feed into your flow
Half of your fans never been IN A CLUB so
What are you rappen bout in the studio
---NOTHIN--- you FRONTIN acting like SOMETHIN
Believing your own hype like invincible or SOMETHIN
Invisible to bullets? So long as you button
Your Teflon vest but I can stab I like cutting
Through 50’s flesh, leave the “magic stick” in a mess
Count yourself blessed IL leave you alive to 2nd guess
Your decision to sell your soul for cheques
I reveal / Real / RV rap fans depressed
50 fell off I guess / he a one album wonder
Wonder If G-unit is next
The “aftermath” of 50s conscience as he’s heading for death
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Old 04-25-05, 08:20 AM   #2
the'holy1
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get at me if your fed up with rappers sellen out for cash
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Old 04-25-05, 08:56 AM   #3
the'holy1
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uppin people>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
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Old 04-25-05, 09:27 AM   #4
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naaaaaaaaaah
you aint gonna get no propps fa this, simply because dissing on 50 is played ta fuck on the real

try droppin somthin more creative an i'll leave feed on it
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Old 04-25-05, 09:49 AM   #5
the'holy1
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alright i no what ur saying
but i wanted to get that of my chest i kept thinking of lines dissin 50 so i said fuck it, il just get it of my chest thanks............... nuppin the new uppin
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Old 04-25-05, 05:20 PM   #6
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yo..i was feelin this a lil, aint over the topp but pretty good for being new here..yp 50 wack and dope at the same time in my eyes....he has almost perfect flow and delivery...but his lyrics are wack as fuck and he starts waaaaayy too much beef...but yo this was a nice lil keystyle.....6.5/10 keep her up...like i said before u did pretty good for being new just keep on elevatin and you'll be one of the best on here right along with me...lol im j/k....not gonna breg bout myself but anyways keep elevatin homie...
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Old 04-25-05, 08:18 PM   #7
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aight thanks hood_dawg

upppin for more views
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