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Old 04-27-05, 09:17 PM   #1
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The Birth..... to Death Part I {please dont sleep}

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Mental image, vintage scholar built off false prophecy /
Dreamt reality, what was, what is, will never be /
Crystal encoded message transmitted from heaven /
God sent, only son, the benevolent reverand /
Birth near shore, near perfect metaphor, 9 times 11 score /
1 percent left, give or take, the earth shake, correctively /
Connectivity stack blocks, Bishop castle talks keneticly /
Blackest knight, contained the most light, sun blinded /
Simple mass, smallest density, largest capacity, nevermind it /
Complex physics binded, the sky blacken, fractions with 19 decimals behind it/
Apostols versus Prophets, in the skies on magic carpets /
Elijah Muhhamed, battled the logic, found a pattern /
Fought Jupiter, in the outter orbit, of the rings of Saturn /
Hurl planets and stars, from other outter regions /
Jupiter hold scrolls, captured from Venus /
stabbed with the south pole, and sucked out earth's core, like intervienous /
Flaming shockwave, sent out definately felt /
Impact on planet, explode, formed the astriod belt /
Triple black, zodiac, Orion star cluster /
Spread stars across the sky, why?, arrow pop gang buster /
Wrote maps exact, forget the compass of Columbus /
Flipped the poles, the south stands above us /
Seeing is believing, perceived perception /
Sight of half depth, the rest, devil's decetption /
Decieved, without correction, greive, the brown leave, blood infection /
White cell split, neurons broke atoms /
The shallowest mind, held depth of 50 phantoms /
Beyond imagine, a clear lake double reflection, the sky penatrate /
AD from BC, centre of the sun, medatate /
Like bullets from a gun pace a rapid rate /
Thoughts travel back, artifact unrecorded date /
Amphibious liquid life, fins formed limbs, 4 /
Creater of 5 Wonders of the World, later added 2 more /
Time of man, charted on a monogram, parabola in half /
Exsistance to scale, mankind a blip on the graph /
Before whole weat, and holy broke bread /
Stood with Moses, on the red sea, water spread /
Knowledge head, power to the wise /
Chicken or egg, retoric paragraph, generalize /
Genesis, In the beginning.. it all relates /
Chicken before the egg, end of debate /
Fixed fate; Animal, to man, built churches and streets /
From the mountain peaks, to sea level, Hebrews speak, they seen devils /
Branded unique, recorded umatched flavour /
Pinnacle of mankind, made love and hate neighbours /
Jewels dropped by fools, lost those forever /
Never equal, jealouSy and greed, death's illegal? /
Once 24, reduced by 50 percent, 2 times over /
Re-arranged calender months, no longer 8th, October /
Still sided Octagon, 8 point position, Ji Q'uan /
Study of life, focus, eons beyond the 5 side pentagram /
Defined helix, 5 angle/triangle, octapus tangled man /
8 and 5, the eighty-five dumb deaf and blind /
Halted grown, evolution of the 10 percent mind /
8 Cards of prophecy, death vulture, 5th sign /
Disease lead famine, infested dead birds /
Some still eat pig, earth population, gone 2 thirds /
The core thought, centred lack of intellegence /
Self-Inflicted Exstinction. S.I.E rellevance /
The same animals who stock their own kin /
That same brother, who sold the colored skin /
Weathered rocks are the mind, warped, right? /
Darts of Limestone, metamorphed to dolomite, Royal golden mic /
This is probobably the realest shit i'll ever write /
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Old 04-27-05, 09:41 PM   #2
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hot vocab i liked this piece alot...very very nice i'll write more late ...i'm a tad busy
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Old 04-28-05, 02:54 AM   #3
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Is this more of an OM i think..
great drop..
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Old 04-28-05, 03:37 PM   #4
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This is dope, it was more of an open mic, you had that rhyme shceme flowin wordplay thing goin on in this piece, great metaphors,and some deep words to think about, this was great how you tied everything together and stayed on point throughout, you even broke out some history and tied it all in, dope piece..1
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