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Old 05-03-05, 04:55 PM   #1
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FOUL PLAY!! best track ive done yet FIRE SAMPLE!!!

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this is a sample off a new track im workin on for my mixtape... its gonna have my boys blackanese n spidey droppin today so ima up this soon... ima try n put sum effort into this one. like i said "THIS IS JUST A SAMPLE!" not my final verse. just tryin to get sum feed rite now.. ima edit my vocals a lil bit n post em on tha final. o yea, im gettin this dj to do sum cuts n vocal samples over the chorus too. shyt should b dope in tha end. let me know whatchall think!

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Old 05-03-05, 05:36 PM   #2
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will u return the favor this time if i leave feed
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Old 05-03-05, 06:20 PM   #3
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yes, i am busy rite now but wen ppl drop links i respond asoon as i get around to it
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Old 05-03-05, 06:26 PM   #4
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ight beat is pretty coo
quality is bad, idk if u eq'd it yet or not
Flow is same as always you can just throw any beat in and it would sound the same..
Delevery is bad, presence.. there is none, maybe cuz u didnt eq yet idk
Lyrics are garbage....
wow... garbage
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Old 05-03-05, 06:28 PM   #5
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lol miss predictable rockin my threads lol. what a bytch made rapper. go suck debits cock u cum guzzler. ur wack. if u think ur better than me prove it. ill holla. btw my shyt stays original while im tryin to find out what rapper ur gonna mimic on ur next track. up ur game n then get at me son! cuz im comfortable knowing where my skillz rest at.
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Old 05-03-05, 06:29 PM   #6
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LOL... gg
all i gotta say chump
gg

o jea and get off my nuzt, thnx u
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Old 05-03-05, 06:31 PM   #7
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stop clogging my threads with your pointless babble. get at me if u wanna set sumn up. enuf said. gg is gay ur gay. get my dik outta ur mouth homo
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Old 05-03-05, 06:44 PM   #8
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i thought i said get off my sack? huh? jea im pretty sure i did
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Old 05-03-05, 08:16 PM   #9
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20 grand only left feed man,dont take it bad
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Old 05-03-05, 08:19 PM   #10
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lol speats, shut up kid. dont get involved pleez. u dont understand the beef me n 20 have had. this isnt honest feed. its hatefueled feed. no offence but u just dont kno wats goin on. thanx. now can we pleez turn one of these 8 posts into an actual "reply"? o yea, n pleez dont post in my threads saying, if i post what i think will u post what u think of mine? thats no good here. im not tryin to b a dick to n e one. but this is gettin a lil ridiculous to me. no hate towards n e one. thanx
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Old 05-04-05, 12:13 PM   #11
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geez thanks for unlockin my shytz dooms.
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Old 05-04-05, 12:23 PM   #12
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listening...beat is hot 4 real, sou betta bring it

DMan u drop in hard homie...." I tortue da orchestra....i put a fork in ya..." nice bar almost as nice da archangel line and the break when u spark bangers -sound fx-cum bak in is sooo nice...this shit is made 4 a dope ride wid a system, ur quality if it was studio wud make u doper than most....ur flow is on beat for the most part a lil bits where u jus miss da snare...damn u doin it big at the moment...mixin n quality issue at the point where u go: "a brain when it drips, i cant resist" its loud n distrted...keep em comin omen

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Old 05-04-05, 12:54 PM   #13
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^ yea if u listen to tha part "brain when it drips i simply cant resist" its purposely distorted to sound evil. i think the effect is called "martian" or sumthin. i got my verse mixed alot better n its much more clear on the final... ill drop it soon stay in ur seeats kiddies lol.. nah i appreaciate tha feed alot tho. thanx yea the quality is much better on the final too. ima get at ur track now pz
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Old 05-04-05, 02:58 PM   #14
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LIke the Beat..
LYrics are Good as well, Flow seems to be on point, But the Lyrics could use a little Turning down.. But Overall Its aight.. Gotta hear it when its Down.. PEace
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Old 05-04-05, 07:55 PM   #15
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returnin the feed... (good looks)

Aight - beat is nuts - lovin it... quality is meh, but you fixin - so its whatever. Flow is on point, you ride this beat good. Lyrics are good, I don't think its that bad. Good track so far, hope the other cats bring it nice on this. You can always get ya boy on the remix Loads of effects in this, some of it is overpowering, but good to see some new stuff rather than straight spittin like most cats. This is aiiight yo. holla.1
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