left feed on debit diss by omen and on checkmate by senser

ok new track well D.Vs old track that never got done i did it before but with my old mic so i redid it with better quality much better and i amplified down key rogues verse a little cuz it was too high still a dope track now even doper leave feed and ill return it back.......................hit the soundclick

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herb

alright..this shit was tight..the first guy was tight...his flow was hella hot.....ya drop was cool cali....nice track........ya flow has gotten a lot better..good job man

aiight...dv's quality good have been better did he re record this or his old verse? cause i couldnt understand some of his words...but he had a good verse..chorus was good i liked that cali your verse was good with lyrics an shit but i cant stress enough about your flow i know its how you rap but lmao anyways good track fellas enjoyed listenin...=1=

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Y.ou Know My Style 20 Niggas Wit 40 Cals

LOL this was soo old skool..lol

CALI why u repostin this..

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exactly, but it was good,all of you showed good verse,i'm sure i responded at some point to this,but yes,dope song all around

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^^i redid my verse better quality

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herb

That intro quote was true..

1st - Flow was good..lyrics were good...too much static when you pronounce words with ss's in them..

2nd - Flow was off..lyrics were good...you forced ya words out too much...depression and quality was good tho....

3rd -

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damn, i think i saw this up when i first came to this site

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Listening...

DV's verse is dope as hell...quality was lackin though...bad ass hiss too...SSSSSSSS...on every single "s"...

Seventhird...dope fuckin' hook...you prolly the best on the track....

C.A.L.I...your vocals were really fuckin loud...you could hear the distortion in your voice...Like I have said before, your flow is odd, but it works...

Good track keep it up...Return the favor..."Prologue"...

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lol no distortion in my voice thats called emotionthanks for the feed averyone and l.e i put my vocals loud to match d.vs loud ass vocalsuppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

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^^in other words your scared running from a battle on a site made for battling and your mod so you dont have to battle you just duck and pop shit?
herb

looking for best song of the week.

listening:
Im loving the beat man.. can u send me the beat??

listening to first verse: quality is terrible man!! wtf happend to your quality?? lol.. but lyrics are amazing man.. its very nice.. and very real and emotional if ya know wut i mean.. like i could tell u ain't lyin..

verse 2: who's this?? lol.. lyrics is nice.. oh its seven.. lol.. dude very good lyrics man... flow is on point and quality is nice..

verse 3: ?? oh cali.. lol.. dude.. seriously put flow to your verse.. ur lyrics are always very good.. but dude.. it sounds like your praying to god in mourn.. not rapping lol.. no offense.. jst wut i mean.. but i know its jst ur style.. like poetry flow

overall: very nice song.. the flow is nice.. and very emotinoal and very real song..

8/10

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hmmm listenin again... dv has a wierd flow but it stays on que f'sho i like ur voice dv shyt is word. chorus by 73 i guess... yea chorus is aight.. shit is mad old i know it... cali u got potiential like i said b4, but honestly flow was waaaaaayyyy off. a good thing u could do is count ur bars, like make sure to spot out a sound or sumthin at the end of every time the beat loops n make sure ur "end rime" word goes there. just sum hints i hope u find helpfull.

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