A COLLAB I WANTED TO HOP ON... A REACT ON FIRST VERSE, TECHOMEGA THEN YOURS TRULY... PROLLY GOIN ON THA MIXTAPE. LETS GET SOME FEED FAMZ!!!

TRUTH HURTS

REPLIED TO
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189687
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2139906

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Listenin now

beat: always been good

1st cat: He hot seems like he was tryin a lil two hard though. he need to relax. I could get into his words i just couldnt get into em comin form his mouth.

2nd cat: nice right here. seems like he lives behind the mic. lyrics was so so. not as good as the first guys

3rd: I dont know why but i didnt really feel the way you rode the beat here. ya punches made up for it though. dont get it wrong wasnt nothin wrong wit ya flow just wasnt feelin it on this beat.

all together this was a nice track. 1st guy had best lyrics overall, second guy had best prescense(if thats how u spell it), and 3rd guy had best punches. yall came together good on this track. it was real good mixtape material

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^ dog i def feel u on what u said about my part. this is just a real quick mix, i wanted to get it online today, ima go thru tomorrow n fix all these little kinks, cuz theres alotta parts i could up a lil to make it ride tha beat better, it sounded nicer before iwent thru n eq'd cuz then wen i put my vocals back to it i couldnt find where to place them to start tha verse lol. but yea this is a lil sample...ima upload a better version tomorrow i appreaciate tha feed fam. glad u enjoyed my punches sumtimes i feel like i concentrate on punches too much n flow falls off tho....

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omen man i aint even gonna front bout the dopeness of ur punchlines man...orginality to the max...tennis lines...that shit where ur like" ill giv the beat a quick second 2 mix" and the beat cuts and then u top it wid that tetris line...hell naw ma man here was like WHAT rewind dat shit...4 times ova..den ut opped it wid a nice tetris concept bar.crazyness...word to ur mixin issues homie-check dat n ur quality if it wa snearer studio ud b sik...keep em comin

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Listening:
Beat: Always loved this beat dayum
Flow for all: first dude: very dope,i love his voice second dude: my favorite of the song,pretty dope man. the omen: dunno, yeahh like always
Lyrics: first dude: not bad,pretty good. second dude: yeah very good. the omen: dopely dope man,
Quality:first dude: verrry good . second dude: mmm pretty good i must say, the omen: mmm not bad but could be better
Overall: doppeeee im downloading this

speats, hold out on that dl homie, ima upload a better verse tomorrow

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Ill shit my nigga... Only heard 2 tracks from u and u seem 2 be just killin it man...

LoL i'ma have 2 drop a audio... *cough collab* i mean... yeeaaahhh

anyways all 3 of y'all niggas did ya job and shit was nice... Beat was good old but still ill... Quality was all good 'n shit mad punches threw the whole thing

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Taj-He-Spitz... You lookin at a problem!

yup yup my young gangster friend...lol funny thing is i still dont know who's beat this is, sounds kinda like this method man one but i dont think it is.....sum1 let me know what beat IM rapping over lol.

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omg this started dope as fuck from the get go here real nice first guy dope verse real dope here real real dope nice flow like crazy good punches like how yall just let the hook do itself made it that much more dope when yall came in good second verse kid real nice punches and metas here real real nice so far this shit is dope as fuck for real real real nice hahaha guess my dicks bigger hahahahahahaha your verse is good too you got a eminem type flow your quality is a little less flow is good as fuck here just turn ya vocals down a little bitt sun thats all needs to be done here punches are dope overall this is a real dope track im feeling this for real 9/10 fix your quality and its a 10/10

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^ no doubt, im actualy gettin ready to uppload my upped version rite now, vocals turned down, quality is sumwhat better and its more on pace. i def do not see an eminem type flow resemblence at all, ive been gettin this ever since i started rapping. lol its like if you rap and you white ya gonna get compared to eminem n shyt lol. nah eminem is dope but ive been more of an underground fan like people like cage, lol peeps said eminem tried to copy cages style when he came out, lol so at least its not just me that gets compared to ppl just for doin my thang. lol good looks tho

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aight newer version up

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1st cat comes hard....am feelin it..presence......i have neva heard of em..but is nice

2nd cat has more energy.....lines are nice......

3rd is my boi ofizzle.....reverb watch it u kinda did 2 much...but flow was there nice overall fam

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lol yeah i realllllllllyyyyy need some mixing lessons or sumthin cuz when i fucks wif tha reverb quick filter n echo chamber it allways sounds like i spit in outter space or sumn like on sum of that helloooooooooooo oooo oooo oooo shyt feel me famz? lol

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woo woo! uppin famz!!!!!!!

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ROFL.. clever name- anyway this is a dope beat- I dont think the first two emcee's did a great job, this is a weird beat that needs absolute domination when spittin and I thought the first two cats fell short, the third however seemed to ride the beat perfect and his verse was alot more entertaining- keep droppin man, thanks for the feedback...1

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