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05-09-05, 10:47 PM | #1 | ||
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Wrong place, wrong time.. (shortest ever)
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Walking down a city alley, kicking stones with my stride
Sirens aren't uncommon, until the light blinds your eyes A loud bang and Im pulled aside, ears ringing, tone def Feel breath on my neck, speckles of sweat clone death Ringing ends, oh no... whats next, persistence of vision Thirty frames per second, getting blindfolded and twisted I get kicked, and go limp with cold steel on my soft skull Crawling through the never, my nerves never felt so dull I go numb, and grab the shag carpet feeling for objects But I'm blinded, the world's spinning and Im inside it I can't hide it, I'm in pain - totally sensory deprived Then it happens, the blindfold gets removed and I see light But am I alive? The tunnel vision races my heart and I panic Not knowing I'm on an operating table, the tunnel goes slanted Couldn't imagine death, it all happened so fast, no time to laugh So with my last gasp of anestetic gas.... the light goes black. http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2140881
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05-10-05, 04:47 PM | #2 | ||
Flyweight
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IP:
bump this.......
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05-10-05, 04:54 PM | #3 | ||
The story goes. Bill, B.
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IP:
nice shit l i n e....OG runnin OM's these days lol...nice wordplay...my fave bars were the first two...nice images there....8/10...rtf...if u want lol
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05-12-05, 05:53 PM | #4 | ||
Flyweight
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IP:
thanks pimp.....
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05-15-05, 10:47 PM | #5 | ||
Flyweight
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IP:
wooooooooooooooooooooooo
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05-16-05, 08:26 PM | #7 | ||
Flyweight
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IP:
chea, thanks............
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05-16-05, 11:33 PM | #8 | |
B.I.G.
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IP:
good short text.... like ya style.....
Never lost da flow.... keep doin.... ama up this for ya .................................................. ...........bump 8/10 PLZ RTF DOWN ON MA SIG
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