left feedback on gattas murder track and on enygmas symphony track as well as most the stuff in here

anyways new track my pops passed away a few weeks ago Key lost his pops too so we felt we should make a track like this hope yall enjoy...........

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listenin..
beat is dope, heard a couple people ripp this nice

1st - dope voice man, somthin about it haha...flow is real nice, smooth shit, delivery fits nice also man

2nd - tight voice also, fits the track..flow is dope as fuck, delivery is tight also..like the switchin back and forth ish also..nice lyrics

overall a pretty dope track here, keep em comin!

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What's up with the chinese hook? Haha... that was kind of poorly mixed into the track as well but apart from that the beat is kind of catchy. I was feeling both verses as well even if CALI seems to be slowly giving in to the dark side, bro quit singing! Lol nah I'm playing dogg, the lyrics were deep and thoughtful, flow was on point, and my condolencies to both of you I know what it's like to lose family. Overall this is a nice track, loads of emotions from both of you.

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Lol, start sounds like gospel music..

CALI ----------- Dont do the quiet higher pitched voice.. It dont sound good.. Sounds too feminin..
Umm, lyrics wernt bad, flow needs work to make it more easy listening sorta.. You need to try and make sure you write your words in such a way that people will always know where your going with the peice cause sometimes it seems like you drift off topic..

DV ------------- Aiight I think you still need a bit of work on delivery and articulation to make ya stuff sound more pro.. Nothing to really complain bout with ya lyrics tho, all sounded pretty nice.

Both jus keep workin on the shit and elevating.
Not a bad track, just needs polishing..

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Wordfizzle my nizzle ooooh no u dizzled.........CALI..lol aite.....this was emotional shit ....made me...mushy inside

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peepin... beat is gurlish.... cali this is tha worst delivery you've ever brought.. i mean yea its spose to be an emotional track but you can bring emotion thru different ways tahn makin ur voice sooo high pitched.. the hook is pretty cool i like tha samples... dv comes in nycely this is probaly one of tha best deliveries ive heard from him he's on tha beat reaaaaaallll welll... damn u soundin like a fuckin true ass man here u can tell this is comin from tha heart.... DAMN! dv that was tah best shit ive ever heard u spit no joke man! that was amazing realest shyt...... damn dv if i were u i would leave ur verse n fill tha first one by urself n put it on a demo for urself... def felt dv on this that shyt was spectacular i think cali kinda brought this track down i was expecting more following up on foolish pricks but this was a let down on ur part...

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chorus - pretty coo...
beat is alright...
cali...doesnt fit when ya raise ya voice.....but still good..
deadly was dope....nice flow wit the beat ........
average track.

thanks uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp ppppppppp

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