fuck, why am I here, sometimes I wish I wasn't/
stainin' my so called soul with all the things I covet/
I wanna love it, but I'm not sure, I guess I'd better get sure/
I wanna take positive energy, and live life I wanna get more/
I'm rich in two ways, but todays peril weighs/
off the scale I can't handle, so I put it into phrase/
got greys(hair) at 24,, that's a healthy sign/
i drink days in a row, yet got a wealthy mind/
my rhyme, isn't to be read I don't care who replies/
i just wan't someone ta hear me, ta understand my cries/
real life, real dreams, real snakes with real schemes/
it's time ta stop bitchin, start fistin' and get green/
I seem ta be alright, from outer appearance/
but a closer examination, reveals insincereness/
so hear this, understand, never again will I run from man/
I come ta stand, on my own two, opposite of a humble man/


mental health, a prized possesion, as is passiveness and aggression/
applied at the right times, even jealousy's a massive weapon/

"Make yourself what you want to be; If you don't, other influences will make you something your not"


Peace

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shit man that was deep had a strong point to it i like it actully i loved it alot,
vocab was good creative and imagenation was good with a good well thought out plot and conclusion shit was hot what more can i say...

10/10

WE SHOULD COLLABO SOMETIME....

RTF of a feed thanks.......

P.S hit me up on PM we should collabo or something whatever u know...

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^^ holla at me if u wanna join....

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last battle K.O ~christyles~ 5-0

whos next!!

Listen, you need to stay, because your dope,and this poetry forum depends on you cats who can write poems and leave marks on sites that suck...yes, i said it.............please stick around your shine is coming..1

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