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05-17-05, 07:28 PM
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Yung Bricc Freestyle
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Quick Shit Rite Here Nigga Move Bacc Cuz The Tray Pound I'll Lay A Nigga Flat And Ace Keep It Cocked Bacc Lean'n To Tha Side Khakis Creased,Im Down To Low-Ride Puttin In Work Wit Tha Steel,Comptons Bacc Nigga The Game Drop Bombs So I Gotta Squeeze Quicka Let Them Niggaz Bleed,Dis Iz Rhythem And Gangsta Call Me Cock Diesal Cuz These Biceps Iz Like A 16 Loaded Tanka
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05-17-05, 08:03 PM
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Human Crack in The Flesh.
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It was easy styll, buh i wanna see ur shyt in full if u know wht im sayin
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05-17-05, 08:49 PM
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yea i feel you nigka,uppin this for some feedbacc
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05-17-05, 10:27 PM
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The story goes. Bill, B.
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umm that was basic...elevate wit different wordplay, better structure and more vocab...return the favor on the links in my sig
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05-17-05, 10:34 PM
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Aw shit
I see dis site iz another "Basic" piece of shit were if you dont use 18 Syllable Words ur garbage Uppin dis for feedbacc
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05-17-05, 10:41 PM
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The story goes. Bill, B.
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no but everything you said has been said or didnt sound good....hence "basic"...be more creative...hell it didnt even rhyme half of the time
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05-17-05, 11:11 PM
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www.militantmusic.com
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this was not good but no bad it was ehhh work on ya shit elevate its cool we all had to do it work on vocab wordplay metaphores structre and all that shit keep doin ya thing
4/10 please return the favor in my open mic link in my sig
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05-18-05, 12:10 AM
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i appreciate da feedbacc but why iz dat nigkaz in da street iz lovin dis verse?
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05-18-05, 12:49 AM
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IP:
Ah this was really basic , nothing really special
nothing i havent seen before , read some tutorils , use beter worplay , and vocab , use hot punchlines and , try to use metaphors it'll make your verse, hot ..overall keep it up and drop a link!
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05-18-05, 01:32 AM
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thanx,uppin dis for feedbacc
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