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Old 05-23-05, 11:03 PM   #1
~*Khatharsis*~
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Sojourn...please feed.

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Feet planted pure
in their nakedness
alone
Stand with me here
upon this world of stone

Atlantic crashing
madly rehashing
speaking to me in waves below
OH!

so close to the edge . . .

Float with me
within this realm
weightlessly leaving
thrice weaving

send me home to the place of my birth

Wild wind whispering
soul singing
it is time
to decide

to fly . . .

Sky above me
sea below
Four corners pulling
me to go

Echoes in sleep
sweet slumber
deep
Turn and awake
last chance
to glance
at this place

I leap


keyed this in 5 mins.
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Old 05-24-05, 05:38 AM   #2
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upping this piece.
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Old 05-24-05, 07:22 PM   #3
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This was a good keystyle, you captured the right words and stayed on topic as it went on, i like pieces like this where you can make them what you want,without losing sight of the true meaning..good shit..keep em coming.1
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Old 05-24-05, 09:07 PM   #4
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thanks man....uppin for more...dont sleep
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