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05-31-05, 11:58 PM | #1 | ||
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Vendetta - I Just Gotta
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A track from me...basically my first solo...came out pretty good not the best but i learning to hold my own doing solo tracks but w/e...hope ya'll like it...I used Joe Budden's "Whatever It Takes" beat...i'll probably do a part II to this beat cause i'ma loving it...enjoy http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/cenario_music.htm http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193178 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193297 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193388
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06-01-05, 12:30 AM | #2 | ||
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yo some dope shit....there drama...the quality is dope..defitnly not wack....u had good flow to that Budden beat..and i was really diggin it..the only drawback i thought there was, was that the accopella was too loud over the beat..maybe u should fix that but otherwise i give it a 8.5/10 good job...rtf when my shit gets reopened
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06-01-05, 12:49 AM | #3 | ||
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decent, ride the beat fine... need more emotion... wont take it to your hotel but cassidy will, dope... honestly thats a solid drop... couldn't find much to hate on... just need to up the emotion a bit or find a lil bit more of your own sound... sounded a lil bit like u were just readin but i liked ya flow, it was really percistant, only got off like once at the begining... ya kid good drop just up the emotion makin me feel the shit a lil more... take a look at my song NICE BOI!!! would appriciate the feed... pz
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06-01-05, 02:38 AM | #4 | ||
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06-01-05, 02:48 AM | #5 | ||
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beat is emotional
Flow- kinda weird vibe sounds like u used too much reverb, lyrics was fittin...the samples kinda lifted the lyrics on this emotions felt..."Lust fightin wit love" interestin shit.....i feel like jumpin on this track..lol overall i think u should rerecord and try to use different setting reverb....and watch out wit echo alittle... and ofcourse my accap added..lol
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06-01-05, 03:36 AM | #6 | ||
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i ain't mix the shit...mixing was done by 20...holla at me on AIM dv...my sn is pvendetta2005...i wanted the lil echo affect...at times when i did my dubs i would just say the multi's like i was talking...i wanted that affect...but holla at me...thanks for the feed everyone
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06-01-05, 03:36 AM | #7 | ||
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This was IIght..I Did a Track to This Beat..anyway...Emotion need swork...Lyrics were coo..But with better delivery and emotion..it can really show..flow was choppy..but not bad..
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06-01-05, 06:48 AM | #8 | |
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beat is dope.....hook is dope...
Are you an UK head cause you sound like or like an american with bad speech epidiments Flow is on point....delivery is nice.... I felt some of the shit you mentioned besdies the baby mamma thing cause I dont have a baby mamma
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06-01-05, 08:27 AM | #9 | ||
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are u a rapper who just post on rv and does no music or are u a rapper who has homo countree jay on his myspace friends list and doesnt do music...uppin for more feedback
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06-01-05, 07:55 PM | #10 | ||
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06-01-05, 11:00 PM | #11 | ||
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06-02-05, 10:27 AM | #12 | ||
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Yo Good Chose of Beat, You really did well with it, The Flow was dope, Yah just Gotta get better Mic presence, Like others said kinda sounds like your reading of a piece of paper, Yah Qaulity was very good as well, Yah Lyrics were aight, Nothing special, But yah got mad potential, Overall nice Drop Hommie keep at it..
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06-02-05, 04:11 PM | #13 | |
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returnin favour
the beats nice i think its from budden, the flow was nice but you didnt sound like you was ready on the mic or something, aint feelin the echo-ey thing you added, lyrics straight qualitys iight also, overall just work on your mic presence and try soundin more natural on the mic overall 7/10 |
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06-03-05, 02:41 AM | #14 | ||
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