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06-01-05, 06:06 PM
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Blanket of Fire
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Blanket of Fire Betwixt anomalies, abominations of the watchful eyes of astronomy, All for fool's gold, to reclaim the souls sold, to end all evil economies. The planet's gravity grabbing missiles into its surface, leaving large cavities. Mothers holding babies, praying for maybes, to stop this cruel, horrible tragedy. Watching the ending world, the orange clouds of flame the skies so angrily hurled. The apocalypse near, feeding off fears, taking no heed of the citizens fetally curled. Gloved fingers smashing buttons, maelstroms ending all the world's gluttons. His eyes glazed, oblivious to the event taking place, down the street, strutting. People praying as he played God to cover the lands in flame, making it aesthetic. Not harkening to the shouts, screaming for a devout to save all them, so pathetic. The person to end it, bending wits, survival only for the people who are the most fit. The demon coming to claim pain on this momentous day... showing his evil tricks. Last edited by Kein Witz : 06-02-05 at 04:21 PM. |
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06-01-05, 06:10 PM
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06-02-05, 10:38 AM
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Uppin'.........
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06-02-05, 02:46 PM
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YARGHEN. Uppin.
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06-02-05, 03:55 PM
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Bumpity........
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06-02-05, 04:03 PM
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Human Crack in The Flesh.
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Try putting it in Bold so it's easier to read...
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06-02-05, 04:21 PM
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<< Give me adequate feed or maybe I'll friggin' turn it pink.
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06-02-05, 04:28 PM
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Human Crack in The Flesh.
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All i kan say... iz it didnt suck ass
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06-02-05, 05:03 PM
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...Okay...that was hardly adequate but...thanks?
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06-02-05, 06:35 PM
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GG Haterz
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Vocab was high, not sure if you talk like that, but if you do I bet a lot of people have a hard time understanding you. Overall this was pretty good, I liked your idea, flow was good, and basically everything was fine. Vocab was a bit too high though. I mean, you don't have to have amazing vocab, cuz then people won't understand you. You have to find that mix.
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06-02-05, 06:39 PM
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o_O I overdid it on that one? Well...I guess I can take any word with more then three letters, put a number next to it, and have a definition under it. o_O Oh well. Thanks for the feed.
And shit, tell that to Acuity. You want to talk about not understanding what people are saying... EDIT: The idea wasn't entirely mine, though. It's for the league, against Hellfire. |
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06-03-05, 09:54 AM
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Don't come at me like I'm a retard. I have a big vocab too, but to make a verse flow well sometimes you have to dumb down the vocab. I don't know how to explain, let me find a battle that is a good example.
Here ya go. This was a topical, and this dude just went crazy with vocab and expected to win cuz of it. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174267
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06-03-05, 10:52 AM
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I'm not calling you an idiot, I'm just saying. << No hate.
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06-03-05, 09:31 PM
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Light Weight
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Ehhhh...I thought this was a decent piece...though I'm kinda wit Rev. on this one, sometimes you gotta dumb it down a lil...other than that, it was a solid drop...good shit...
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