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06-11-05, 02:36 AM | #1 | ||
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Ambidextrious Love
IP:
Love has to leave me,
I ask why and she answers, I crossed a line by loving her... she has to leave cause whenever the line was crossed before she didn't like it..or want it..or deserve it... and it taught her what love was and not what love is... so even if she was to love me I couldn't be confident it was real, and I can't Imagine such silent torture, being forced to be loved, she told herself violence wasn't love, but than a voice in her head said love hurts. And it hurt her so bad that it stole her ability to scream, but gave her no reason to ever want help or love again. I love this girl so much, if only I could just go back in time, and...... tell her I never loved her, than I would still love her, but at the same time she wouldn't have to leave me because she thinks i loved her in the way that she knows love, because she doesn't know what love really is.
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Seek & Destroy
We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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06-13-05, 05:35 AM | #2 | ||
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IP:
uppin this shit
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Seek & Destroy
We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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06-13-05, 10:51 PM | #3 | ||
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IP:
wow i was definitely feeling this piece.. just the title alone gave me soo much information but yet led me into reading the whole piece..it was really good piece.. and u still got that poetry blood in u.... peace man
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06-15-05, 06:48 PM | #4 | ||
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IP:
Good poem man, your feelings shone through, and it was written well,i felt it, you had a nice way of putting to light what you felt,your words were chosen and used well, nice job.keep dropping.1
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08-18-05, 04:37 PM | #5 | ||
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IP:
Uppin this shit..it needs to be read....
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Seek & Destroy
We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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