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Old 06-14-05, 12:07 AM   #1
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Check-Mate (Young Drama)

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HaHa MuhFucka I'm Back Nigga

This Cunt Aint Even Through Puberty So How He Gone Diss Me
Rubber Mallet Bounce His Punches Back Them Shit's Just Miss Me
And Your Audio Sound Like Static, So You Aint Coming Way Hard
This Fag Boy Can't Cut RV's Mixtape So He End Up In My Grave Yard
You Made In Eight Yards..................Sike Subtract That By Eight
Dawg I Push Cowards Back And Fourth That Can't Pull They Weight
I Put This Fag In Post Traumatic, So This Faggots A Drama Queen
Only Guns You Hold That Shoot Is Them S Soacker & Water Beams
Dawg Consider Your 15 Seconds Of Fame Up......You Nothing Bitch
And You Aint From Killa Kali Dawg, Inglewood Fag's Just Frunting Shit
This Faggot's A Bitch Put A Whole In His Bell Button So Is Navel Burns
Put The Desrt Eagle To His Face Watch Em Pussy Out The Tables Turned
Listen Dawg I'm Gone Ask You This Once And Politely So Check This Out
If You Aint Got Talent, And Most Hated On RV You Best Respect Me Now
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Old 06-14-05, 12:45 AM   #2
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the lines were streched.But this is text and that could be your flow so
I'ma ignore it.I love the rubber mallet line,I might bite it someday.
The punchlines were great.You a dope battle rapper.Young drama's was dope too.
I like the battle you got goin on here.I'll keep peepin the shit.

Nice Job (applause)

one love


please peep mines too
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Old 06-14-05, 12:46 AM   #3
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Alright shyt Homie Wasnt Really Feelin it But Itss Nice!Punches werent all there!personalz werent all there!but seen a Lil of everything but Its all good!not the best i seen from ya but in my case its a 16/20!Holla BAck Atcha Boy Mayne!
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Old 06-14-05, 12:53 AM   #4
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Thanks Wrote It In Five minutes
After He Talked Shit To Me In A Thread
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Old 06-14-05, 01:13 AM   #5
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Dis Was Decent

I Liked Dis Bar

"I Put This Fag In Post Traumatic, So This Faggots A Drama Queen
Only Guns You Hold That Shoot Is Them S Soacker & Water Beams"

But Why Do Niggaz Think That Sayin I aint From Kali Is Hot?

7/10

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Old 06-14-05, 01:16 AM   #6
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Coz You Aint From Inglewood Or You Wouldn't Be on A CPU
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Old 06-14-05, 01:19 AM   #7
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Nigga How Can Da Fuck Can U Say I aint From Da Wood

U Aint From Da LBC Bitch Nigga

Wat, Cuz I Live In Da "Hood" We Cant Have Comps Made From Old Parts

Dumb Nigga
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Old 06-14-05, 01:20 AM   #8
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I Aint From The LBC, Dumb Ass, Lmao Never Claimed Shits Dawg, Any Way Squash It Shits Now And Leave My Boy 50 Bars Alone And It's Squashed
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Old 06-14-05, 01:36 AM   #9
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Deal.............................................. ..

Just Make Sure He Dont Say Nuttin Bout Me
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Old 06-14-05, 01:37 AM   #10
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Aiight Dawg I Got It hommie
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Old 06-15-05, 01:18 PM   #11
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Ey Dude, Lmao! What The Fuck How It Says This Thread Bin Closed But Still Open?
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Old 06-15-05, 07:45 PM   #12
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Listen Dawg I'm Gone Ask You This Once And Politely So Check This Out
If You Aint Got Talent, And Most Hated On RV You Best Respect Me Now

deff. best lines...........nice job mayne not great, but ok......no hate to u ur doin ur thing prob. goes with a flow so i aint got nothen to bother u about.....just dropped in to tell u nice shit......RTF on my open mic's mike jackson diss...thanks peace
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Old 06-15-05, 07:51 PM   #13
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who u diddin in this????..no names mentioned
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Old 06-29-05, 12:05 AM   #14
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