Ladies tired of thugs, seem to be wired at clubs all using
Same rap which is lame crap try find love its not amusing
I’m a brother laid back others parade with crack cruising
In drop tops letting the Hip Hop rock on their CD losing
Friends in the bruising winds of hear say I fear today
The pain is dull in my brain and skull I don’t know the true way
Life is continuous strife is tremendous problem after dark
Its an eager feeling to be like a beaver dealing and chewing bark
While spewing art on pages from the start it’s amazing in the park

Ure So Fucking Shit Haha....and Dont Try Say Nething Because Im Whoopin Ure Ass 3-0 In A Battle Bitch

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Why dUn you shUt the fUck up?IF ya goNNa post iN his shit....aT leasT leaVe adeqaute feedback.

Neways

I assume you are a girl that is tired of thugs then based on the title?If you not...my bAd.The problem with ya verse was that ya started on topic....then drifted away.THe end a the verse seemed to be like a "I hate LIfe" shit.A bigger vocab would be nicer too.But bassically......stay on topic next time.
Keep ya head up and keep it gully homie

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=195795
^^Hit me in my battle plz.

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so how many post i've put up compared to your prewritten battle verse but in you little neverp post shit brain you're the best man you suck horse ass no skill at all

u only a MADDRAPPER cuz u know u cant come up with shit if u were on the crapper/... i heard u aint no fighter but u a good bitch slapper/...fuck with me and see what happens after/ people dont hate on you they just readin ur shit with laughter/ true emcees add crazyness, drama and suspense ur shit just doesnt make any sense, im done im finished clownin someone wacker than ten 50 Cents