http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2229213

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=195723

I did this for a battle I was suppose to have but I dont think the guys is gonna show, and I still would like some feedback or criticism on this. I'm new to recording but I been battling for a while, but I'm learning fast about doing audio tracks and all. Maybe I can get some tips or advice from more experienced emcees, so feel free to drop anything on ya mind when you listen...good or bad its all helpful in one way or another. I'll gladly return the favor.

"Round Of Applause..."

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/wri...=prolificdapoet

I used this beat before...

flow was aite, presence could be betta. quality was fucked but overall as a diss track..i wanna hear the otha kid come back..

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If he ever decides to post I'll link you to his page

Listening through some generic speakers and subs thart are pretty clear:

The lyrics are them self are pretty good (considering that we don't know this dude so the personals don't conect 1/2 as hard) but the emotion coulda came up a little bit IMO. It picked up more toward the end of the verse. You need a pop filter (beause you've got a lot of boom on the vocals) and you need to compress your vocals so they're all the same volume instead of high in some spots and low in others. This may also have to do with the range you're at next to the mic, like far some times, then close others. The more even and consistant you can keep it, the better. I can't tell if it's you and the mic or the progrm you're using, but some light EQ work would def help and compressor for sure. This sounds like the silver RadioShack mic. has the identical traits.

Hope this helped. 1

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ok thanks, i will take all of this into account the next time i record and see if ppl begin to notice the difference. The mic is from radio shack but its not the silver one, its that $20 mic.

Yea, for all we know they could be identical internally. But it definitely sounds like an RS mic to me. GL in the future fam. 1

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son you merked this kid...only things you need to work on is ya lisp...try sayin ya words clearer...and ya production could be better cuz in some parts you get lower and then you come right back up...is you still got the session open holla at me i'll clear up ya acapellas be iight good track overall man i give it a 8/10 iight 1ne..

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