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Old 06-22-05, 11:11 AM   #1
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did this last night, didnt spend much time on it but its still pretty nice...the 5th beat down I think

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Old 06-22-05, 02:13 PM   #2
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The strings or whatever the melody is, is pretty nice, I'm feelin it. Seems kind of basic, like it needs another layering of melody, and this needs a bass on it in a bad way. A dope bass would add so much to this beat seriously. I would also make your drums a little harder - but thats just personal opinion vs. what someone else may like. Also - there is no change up for a hook, so you might want to look at that. Not a bad beat - some good potential man. Keep dropping.
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Old 06-22-05, 02:42 PM   #3
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there is a change up for the hook, the chords totally change like 20 bars in, 4 bar intro and 16 bars for the first verse and then the chorus it changes....I do understand what you sayin about the drums though. I did it real late last night and didnt spend much time on it...thanks for feeding
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Old 07-01-05, 10:17 AM   #4
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yeah i kinda agree with er'body. but i think the beat is fly. i like where it's headed. keep it up

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Old 07-02-05, 10:37 AM   #5
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Beat was alright......I agree with Phenom on how the strings were nice but the whole beat seemed simplistic. I think it was just missing something. Keep up the good work though......
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