here's the link..its called Down And Out Freestyle...i ain all that great on da mic so dun hurt my feelins 2 bad


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/x...laxxx_music.htm

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betta get some links of tracks u left feedback on ckuz this will get closed...quick...

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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2244739

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2244746

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u aint 2 bad girl...ur flow is aight 4 a freestyle...this beat is pretty easy to free to, lyrics u droppin r aight, ur flow starts fallin off, in tha way it sounds a lil forced at points, for a newbie 2 this is a pretty gd free..keep dese drops comin

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thanks...more feed back would be appreciated

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show more emotion in ya voice, ma.....you sound ya reading off the page.....emotion will keep a muh fuckah into what you say......ya content was iight, i cant realli diss that, cuz my free styling skills arent all that.....

it was long,....but yeah, work on showing emotion....give us attitude, cuz nobody is gonna feel threatened from listening to that.....

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..:: Artik In The Phlesh::..
.Re-Writing The Re-Run.

thanks..n i see wat ur saying..i do sound like im bored when i flow...

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not bad ma....lyrics were tight and flow was aight....just kinda add a lil more personality and expression in it and it'll be perfect...8/10....RTF on my shit..."Fresh Emcee"