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06-29-05, 05:24 PM
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Intermental - Is this the end....part II
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My life like an hour glass, my time's runnin' out, My hurt is like rain, my tears locked up in clouds, My death bed prepared for me, its time for me to sleep, Its like the undertaker has already buried me deep. Verse One The burden is heavy, but why do I have to carry it, My life in danger, but why do I have to cherish it, My heart ripped through my soul and thrown away, Lord please forgive me , I dont wanna die today, My time has come as light beckons and darkness falls, My time is up now as my heart stops and blood stalls, I lack the oxygen, it seems I have stopped breathing, My life is lifeless, my body has lost all its feeling, My life going good, dont make me leave It seems like im drownin, so Lord let me breathe I wanna take my head out the water, let me see I can see it in my mind, my enemies plottin to kill me I knew it will happen one day, so lord whether the storm Lord, Im turnin to you so protect me from dusk till dawn Hook My life like an hour glass, my time's runnin' out, My hurt is like rain, my tears locked up in clouds, My death bed prepared for me, its time for me to sleep, Its like the undertaker has already buried me deep. Outro One Niggas frontin' that they aint scared to die, But if I aimed atchu, would you look me in the eye, And tell me that you aint afraid of death, You jus worried bout gainin ure street cred, Well Ill let you gain my street lead, Rippin thru ure feet, n' comin out ure head Hook My life like an hour glass, my time's runnin' out, My hurt is like rain, my tears locked up in clouds, My death bed prepared for me, its time for me to sleep, Its like the undertaker has already buried me deep. Outro Two The tears fallin, the rain pourin Showerin me with fear My heart so dead its in mournin Is the end of my life near? Hook My life like an hour glass, my time's runnin' out, My hurt is like rain, my tears locked up in clouds, My death bed prepared for me, its time for me to sleep, Its like the undertaker has already buried me deep.
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06-29-05, 05:35 PM
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~*This Worldz A Sin So Why Hate Me For My Habits~*
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IP:
yo homie fck text for you u better of with emotional shyt feel me u better in TOPICS i think thats ur thing felt the emotional n felling everything else feel !liked how you did this and really feeling it RTF in mine "life going downhill"
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06-30-05, 12:41 AM
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Better than you..
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IP:
this reminded me of some tupac style shit. you needa work on impact more tho. i wasn't really feelin this. if you wanna talk about death then you gotta get down real grimey but the way u tried it has been done before so i think you should try a different approach or sumthin to make it more interesting.
uppin.
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred… Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug… Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby… |
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06-30-05, 01:59 PM
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IP:
thanks people.....im happy for the feedback...yeah and ghost im emotional due to my experiences......ill RTF one minute
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