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Check in by: 07-03-05 at 09:40 PM

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.Kan.i.Bul. has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-02-05 10:11 PM.

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flow verse has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-03-05 09:53 AM.

Laughter is the best medicine so ur rhymes are a cure
Bitch keeps posting bull shit like we asking for more
This is like a game of hungry hungry hippos
The winner is the one with the most “marbles”
So dumbass go away . . . you passé
Couldn't pour piss out of a boot if the instructions were on the heel . . . And now u’ve lost so just deal
And remember I’m the hero bitch . . .and if you lucky I’ll flip u and put u to the left of me like my side kick (get it)

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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff

"and if you lucky I’ll flip u and put u to the left of me like my side kick (get it)" just in case no one gets it my---t-mobile "side kick"--

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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff

Voted For: .Kan.i.Bul.

flow verse - hippos and marbles doesnt rhyme...your punches were weak...had no personals.....lacked vocab and multis.not real good

.Kan.i.Bul. - had some good wordplay and punches...had a multi...some of it wasnt great but u took it...nice job


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word to hydro --- two words don't have to be spelled the same to ryme --- who do you say marbles? its pronouces marbols.. and hippos... "os" sound hear it? na i might be nuts (sarcasm) what ever at least u backed up ur vote with words . . . FLOW VERSE

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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff

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Voted For: .Kan.i.Bul.

Kanibul get it for using decent punches and concepts, he had a better structure, flow and everything...still room to elevate a lot though, but a lotta potential.


flow,
hit up the tuts man, you came weak as fuck...gotta learn punches and personals man.

no hate

rtf vs verbal shoota in 3 days or this vote gets DQ'ed!!

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Voted For: .Kan.i.Bul.


Laughter is the best medicine so ur rhymes are a cure
Bitch keeps posting bull shit like we asking for more
^^u said his rhymes got wit,complement...0/10
This is like a game of hungry hungry hippos
The winner is the one with the most “marbles”
^^no....0/10
So dumbass go away . . . you passé
Couldn't pour piss out of a boot if the instructions were on the heel . . . And now u’ve lost so just deal
^^C'mon..at least one punchline.. 0/10
And remember I’m the hero bitch . . .and if you lucky I’ll flip u and put u to the left of me like my side kick (get it)
^^NO......0/10

What the hell.There was not one punchline in this shit.Ur flow was horrible due to stretched lines and worst structure.But the punches was the worst part.It like you didn't even try.

Act Stupid I'll Deal Wit You....Ya Friends Dont Even Want A Deal Wit You
Mills? U Deal Nickels....Dis "Dicks Green"....Finish Jerkin Ya "Dil Pickle"!!
^^^didn't rhymes.....suks...3/10
You Still Livin A Cunts Life...."Bone" Husbands Den Literally "Dog" Wives
This Dogs Trife....He Paid His Cock 2 Quit Drugs....Cuz It Foamed White!! (get it?)
^^^OK...not all that though...4/10
Everyone Knows U Sideways....But "Rainbow Brain".....I Dont Mind Gays
So Continue WACKIN YASELF EVERY WEEK...Like Abusive Bod-Days!!
^^OK....4/10
U Dont Deserve A Verse, Must Be 50 Cent...Cuz All Ya Flows Get Worse
Last Time U Cursed...Ya Mom Beat Ya Pants So Hard It Became A Skirt!!
^^^No.....2/10

ur verse flowed and was structured far better than the other guyU had some weak punches in there.U also need to work on punches.But the differnece between you and the other guy was that you actually had punches while the other guy had none.

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